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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I have been waiting for someone to write a iruka-seme fic!! I was beginning to lose hope. THank you so much! I hope you continue this fic in a sequel. I'd like to see what happens when iruka finds out about the downside to the breaking the jitsu. plus he deserves to know that he was what kakashi went through for him and how much he is loved.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was totally worth it. -two thumbs up.- It made me cry..yup. Old Yuminori cried.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'little' :P? Heh, cuteness.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The final chapter!!!
That was nice!! The whole fic was amazing no doubt about that!
Well, whatever you do, don't stop writing! Even if it takes you 2 months to write one chap I don't care, but don't waste your talent...
You're an awsome author!!
I'm happy I could read great fics like yours...Looking forward to any other stories you might have in store...Naruto, Gungrave etc..
God, I think there's not a single one I didn't like!
Anyway...Keep on going!
Yurikai Kurosaki^^
That was nice!! The whole fic was amazing no doubt about that!
Well, whatever you do, don't stop writing! Even if it takes you 2 months to write one chap I don't care, but don't waste your talent...
You're an awsome author!!
I'm happy I could read great fics like yours...Looking forward to any other stories you might have in store...Naruto, Gungrave etc..
God, I think there's not a single one I didn't like!
Anyway...Keep on going!
Yurikai Kurosaki^^
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you didn't abandon this fic! I've been waiting to see what would happen! I'm sorry I took so long to review - I'm in law school now and I can't read fics as often as I'd like. This chapter was great and I can't wait to see how it will end! Update as soon as you can - this is an awesome fic! And I'm glad Iruka and Mizuki will fight later in the series - that'll be so cool!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't quite get how Kakashi got out of that, but that's okay, let's move forward to the Kaka Heals Iru part of the fic, yeah!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I remember reading that same doujinshi. You have made an excellent story out of it. The sex Kakashi and “Iruka” had, made me blush. I can hardly wait till the next chapter.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, I must say... Horrible, horrible cliffhanger, shame on you. XD Now that I got that off my chest, I'd say that the chapter turned out very well. I like that a lot of the fight scene focused on Kakashi and Mizuki's attitudes and feelings towards eachother (especially Kakashi's scary anger and Mizuki's irritating ego) instead of just being a plain fighting chapter. I think it turned out much better than if the fighting would have been the main focus. The scene with Iruka and Naruto was very sweet and it made me laugh a little when Naruto was being comforted by poor Iruka despite the situations! ^_^
I feel sort've sad that this is almost the end for this fanfiction. I love it so much that I want it to keep going XD I'm looking forward to the big climax and I can't wait to see how you write everything in. *Gives you a heaping hand full of chibi-Mizuki-with-kunai-through-head cookies* Oh, and can't wait to see Mizuki (hopefully) get his just deserts next chapter!
I feel sort've sad that this is almost the end for this fanfiction. I love it so much that I want it to keep going XD I'm looking forward to the big climax and I can't wait to see how you write everything in. *Gives you a heaping hand full of chibi-Mizuki-with-kunai-through-head cookies* Oh, and can't wait to see Mizuki (hopefully) get his just deserts next chapter!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!!!! damn you!! DX the evil cliffhanger of doom haunts me. *sigh* please update soon or i will most likely go through withdrawl ^__^
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< NOOO!!! Evil cliffhanger!!! please update soon, i love your fic *huggles you* i hope this ends happily with a nice lemon scene in the end *grins*