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for Break the Seal

by AshtonRose

person Kakashi_Dono
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you and your cliff hangers. >O So many questions roam my mind. You must update as soon as you can before I go crazy!
person Rabid
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But no one's seen the end of the story, so how could have you? Anyways, I think Naruto was perfectly IC. Not to mention he's in a relationship with Sasuke! ^-^ heh. Okay, other than that, I'm currently considering all the Iruka torment going on right now in the Naruto world, the latest anime episodes actually have Mizuki(more powerful even... can you tell the future?) battling Iruka! Which you probably know, but I gotta say anyways... ^-^ Heh. Well, I've added my two cents... so I have to add one more thing! Mizuki better die a painful death. ^-^ Other that that, I can't wait to read more! ^-^
person Rabid
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I swore I've reviewed this story before... right after I read the doujinshi, I believe. Ah well, I guess I have to mention that I like the changes! ^-^; Thank you very much for posting this story! ^-^; hehe...
person A-Person
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I wan't to see what happens next! :) Poor Iruka. T_T
person Broken
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is a great story!! I can hardly wait to read the rest! I have yet to pass the third test in the real series so I am a bit lost at the moment with hokage, but I think I got it ^^ I shall be checking in for updates!! Keep up the great work!
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best ones yet ^_^ You captured Kakashi's rage perfectly here--I could definitely feel the murderous intentions in the air. I also was amused at the fact that Tsunade was a little wary of the murderous Kakashi, and that she seems to be a little uncertain how she feels about poor Yondy and Kakashi. Very like Tsunade. XD I can't wait to see what happens with the battle between Mizuki and Kakashi, I'm hoping the guy gets slaughtered beyond recognizable body parts if we're all lucky. We're gonna see a real Kakashi x Iruka lemon before the end, right?~~ We all hope so!

*Gives you tons of sweets* So glad to be back and see another great chapter, and can't wait for the next one! ^^
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much this chappie but please don't kill kakashi That'd be awful. Well update soon

Arry
person Cim
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Halfway through the chapter i was like: YAY i think i know how it ends!!! But..I dont know..you could be cruel and kill them all off :'(... So I basically know the general ways you could end the story... anyways...please update soooooon ^^

mm...kakashi and yondaime...
person jdauss1
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Kakashi finally found Iruka and that he seems OK for now. Go Sasuke for staying with Naruto 24/7! Kakashi should be able to take Mizuki, right?! And it looks like there's a way to break the seal! Yay! I hope this is gonna have a happy ending...
person ayachan
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seal breaking justu? .... YESNOSHIT lol.. that was the thought running through my mind when tsunade mentioned that, lol..... yay for sasuke always being w/ naruto, and kill mizuki!!!! painful death!!!!!