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for Break the Seal

by AshtonRose

person kiasca
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_< It's my fav kakairu fic here in AFF.net, cant wait to read the next chap pleasse update soon!!!!
person Kakashi_Dono
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER. >< Yeah. I hope Kakashi-Sama will kick that damn...damn it. Gr. ><
person lolli-chan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really liked this story!! i think i know what doujinshi that your talking about. i forgot the name though, hehe. i can't wait to read the rest. graet job by the way, bye!
person jdauss1
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That wasn't a bad chapter! I wish you would have gotten back to Iruka, but it looks like you'll pick up there next time, so it's OK. I'm glad Sasuke's presence made Mizuki back off. That would have been horrible - Iruka and Naruto hurt the same night. Anyway, please keep going - this is an amazing fic and I can't wait for more!
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute chappie but damnnit when is kakashi going to find iruka or someone

Arry
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You managed to get this chapter out, after all! I'm happy now ^_^ This chapter is my favorite chapter out of all of them so far. You captured the mood just perfectly between Yondaime and Kakashi, it was so sweet when I was reading it and so sad looking back. Everything flowed well in this chapter, and I just loved the entire flashback scene between Yondaime and Kakashi so much! And of course, I'm dreading (in the good way) the chapter that everyone understands what happened to poor Iruka. T_T

*Gives you gobs of KakIru, YondaiKaka treats* I'm looking forward to getting back and having lots of new chapters to read. ^_~ I'm going to go into withdrawel over this next week without any stories to read!
person Balafeo
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's so good, but also so sad! Write more quick!
Poor Iruka!
person ARRYELLE
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should be ashamed actually going thru with the rape poor iruka he's tainted now
theres no hope

person lstdpnthght
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=O This story's really good~~! Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O yeee. I pity whoever finds him. Not that I don't want to hug him ( no pity for Iruka though :P, pity sucks, just love )........ye. just ye.