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ooooooooooo..... what s gonna happen to Naruto?????? And whos gonna find Iruka when he doesnt show up to work?????

I really like this fic so far - and I've only read the first chapter (such a bittersweet ending)! I'll be reading the rest as soon as I can!

Chapters two and three were good too! (Of course) I feel bad for Iruka and Kakashi - they both have to hide their feelings from the other. So sad! And Kakashi had to be mean to Iruka to protect him. *sigh* As long as there's a happy ending!

That last chapter was horrible (but in a good way - as in it was written well, but it's sad what happened). I wonder how Iruka and Kakashi will react to this later. The chapters before this were good setup for what happened in this one. I really like it so far and can't wait until you update!

IRUKA!!!!! ;_;_;_;_; but you can't let him just... succumb to that! make him go save naruto!!! i'd think he'd be burning w/ rage at the thought of someone hurting naruto.. argh!!! next cahpter please!!!! have mizuki killed or something... ok, maybe no killed.. but tortured... badly!!! argh!!!

Suprised???
Hum, it's more like...What the Hell!!??!! Mizuki heh? Well, that was a shock...I almost died from a heart attack damnit!!! While reading the first lines I was like: Noooo Kakashi!! What do you think you're doing being an asshole playing with Iruka-sensei's feelings!!! And then: WHAT!!?? it's...Holly crap!! It's that damn bastard Mizuki, he's come back..(sorry I know you like him, but he's still a bastard..héhé)..Anyway, that's basically what I was yelling while reading the first lines.

AND WHAT THE HECK IS IRUKA'S DOING?? I know he's just been raped and all (snif snif..poor dolphin) BUT he's got to do something for Naruto!!! Go get Kakashi, the Hokage, an Anbu squad, the Army I don't care but do something damnit!! *got carried away...'again'*

Apart of that..I really wonder what will Kakashi do when he finds out about what Mizuki did...
Oh and good to know you figured out a way to end this fic...(hope it's an happy one--*punch* okay I won't say it again...LMFAO!!)

Well see ya in chap7
Yurikai Kurosaki
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Aw! Poor Iruka--I was starting to feel pain reading that, I know he has to be not-walking for the next week or so. You managed to write the violence incredibly well. You definitely had me cringing! I can't wait to see how Kakashi reacts to this. I hope someone catches him before he gets to Naruto, though. Dirty-want-to-be-pedophile-rapist ^_^;

This was an excellent update, as usual, and I can't wait to see the next chapter with an ending like that! *Gives you some KakaIru treats along with some Mizuki-with-kunai-through-head cookies* ^^

O.O I don't know what to say but that was intense very sad to have that happen. I am so glad you didn't cop-out and have Kakashi save the day. So many fics are pradictable that way. Damn. I agree, Iruka is a lover not a fighter and please make this happy. I WANT IRUKA AND KAKASHI. :3 But....I'll take anything/ Love what you are doing please update.

Waah! I got that doujin! I read it just a few minutes ago! ^__^

nice work with the writing and all, keep it up!

awesome story, love your ideas (especially the clone one)
update soon, i wanna know who the 'mystery' person is!