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You will continue.
You will make a good chapter.
You will tell your secrets..



Did my mind control work. Huh? Huh? Better. Pfft.

Hey! Hi again!
Okay this is kind of a weird review, but anyway...here it goes:
Well first off, I have to say that I got a little down while reading the forth chap, with Iruka diying if he ever felt love for Kakashi. It actually made me sad a bit...I was like *oh my god something good's gonna happen..and then, -BANG- the angst got in the picture 'et a pété ma balloune'..I guess I could say that it really knocked my head off.*...I think I already mentionned the I was a happy ending lover previously, so I guess you get my point, but then again it's your fic, I'm just saying...

THEN, the fifth chapter arrived and you did something that I would have not expected after the forth, you really surprised me there! I was quite delighted to read it. Even with the angst you've thrown in, you've managed to get me pretty captivated alright!!! I loved how the events turned out with Iruka being shocked by Kakashi and all, and the end...well part of it that is...*grrrr* cliff-hanger heh??? Damnit I hate those!! They're just sooooo getting on my nerves, but on the other side, I kind of like them too as they're makin me want even more!! *Sometimes I just don't know what I want..* LOOOLLL=^_^=

I know this review is kind of shitty and I'm sorry for that, but at least you know on what side of the force I stand = Oh yeah happyendin--BANG-*Hit by my inner freak* I think you must be sick of reading this by now...lol*...so now that's up to you to do whatever you want with my comments...HOWEVER!..Don't fool yourself, whatever happens, I'm still gonna be right behind ya keeping reading your stuff and writing reviews!!!

Keep on going...I'll be waiting for the next one..as always..
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki^^

Forgot something:

I really REALLY liked the idea with Iruka's clones...I don't think I would of thought of that..Pretty original. I was impressed and if you keep throwing stuff like this coming from your mind, I think I'm gonna start to fancy your great ideas...
You're awsome...Don't ever stop writing.

Again, Yurikai K.
=^_^=

I don't know whether to love the lemon or be creeped out by it! XD Either way, I enjoyed the chapter, it was nice and angsty for everyone. Gotta love Kakashi's creative sex methods, too. O_o; That *Would* be something that he'd come up with! Ecchi jounin. @_@ I think you did Tsunade just fine to have not seen much of her. I haven't watched 30 or so episodes now, actually, myself.

*Gives you KakaIru gummy bears--for a little mix up* Keep writing ^_^ Can't wait to see more and looking forward to seeing another lemon, too. Hopefully not with creepy assasin boy x_<

Aw. Sorry, I didn't get to your other chapter in time to review it! Evil family and their evil reuinions. So I'll just say I loved both of them! But how are they going to end up together if poor Iruka is gonna die if he remembers? T_T It's so saaaaad @_@ It was so sweet for Kakashi to let Iruka rest his head on his shoulder--and even kiss him! But I bet he's gonna be back to pushing him away and being mean soon. *Sigh*

I'm looking forward to your next update, your writing is as awesome as ever ^_^ *Gives kaka-iru-love-cookies* Make loooove and peeeeace XD At the end, of course, and demonic angst for the entire rest of it~~~ ^_^ This story is just so interesting that I check for updates at least three times a day~ ^_^;;;

jessh It was going so well and then you throw in the angst again and it's going to become more dark ok well update soon I personally love mushy stories but his isn't mushy is angst lots of it too tears my heart is breaking wheres the love ppl

Arry

Nyaooww!!! Fast update!!
Go Go Iruka!! C'mon you can do it..make Kakashi fall madly and definitly for ya!!!
Oh and Kakashi, I know you're doing it for his own good, but please stop pushing him away or you'll make me cry!!*This was definetly stupid...*
Okay, seriously now, why was Gai blushing???? Don't tell me he's the one that's gonna get between them!!NNOOOO!!!*HÉHÉ*
PLEEEEASE TELL ME!!!...*desperate here*
Well anyway...have to go to sleep now, I'll write you something longer next time.=^_^=
Keep on going...I tatolly can't wait for more but it's not like I can do anything about it..hihi
Seeya
Yurikai Kurosaki

Thanks for the update -- can't wait to read some of your "interesting ideas", lol. ^^ Keep up the good work!!!

Very cute idea, and very well done -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! ^^ Keep up the good work!!!

lovely chapter, i was angry with kakashi for being so rude to sweet little iruka ^__^ but i guess he did it with the best intentions. Please update soon i need to know what Gai says to iruka *giggles like a moron*