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yay! updation! i've been dying for an update for this story!!! really good work so far!! please keep up the good work and update asap

*Blushes*
Didn't expect you to dedicate the second chapter to happy me here!
Things are getting somewhere..and Kakashi is such a jerk!!...Don't be mean to Iruka-sensei!!*pout*
They absolutely have to end up together *happyendings freak..lol* and I'm looking forward to know how Iruka will find out and how long will Kakashi be able to push him away...Naaannnn..Kakashi will never be able to resist Iruka for too long and on the other side, I'm pretty sure Iruka wouldn't be able to stand an irritating-jounin-scarecrow for forever either...(what am I doing here writing the damn story for you! Sorry..hihi)
Anyway, as long as you give me a great ending, whatever you write, I'm sure it'll be fantastic!!=^_^=
Oh by the way...I did read the doujinshi, I believe it's called Yukimushi or something, well, just wanted to say that you're fic is waaay better...I mean, your writing style give more interest in the whole thing and there's 'details'!!*details freak here....jeez, if I continue like this, you're gonna think that i'm simply just a total freak..héhé...humhurm..which I'm not by the way..^^*...oh and of course...you add it some lemony yumiiness.
So keep on doing....Mouahahaaaaaa can't wait for the next one!!!
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki

Aww! I love this story~~ ^_^ I've read a lot of KakaIru stories, but this one is very original in my eyes (I haven't read the doujinshi you based it off of). Being a huge fan of KakaIru, I can never find any good lengthy stories of it that aren't left unfinished. T_T It's so depressing. Your writing style is very flowing and nice and descriptive, too, so that's a big plus! I can only find those in one-shots usually XD

Please make this a super long story! *gives you dolphin and scarecrow shaped cookies and cupcakes* And I beg you to make it have a happy ending or I'll cry and withdraw into a deep, dark depression that will forever haunt my soul. Well--maybe not *that* bad, but I promise that I'll be very sad. T_T I already feel bad for poor Iruka getting so coldly brushed off~~ Er, I'm going to end this review here. XD I love it! Update regularly and I'll stuff you full of sweet kakairu cookies~~ ^_^

I absolutly loved it!!!!!!!
Very well done XD
Poor Iruka V___V But i hope to see another one!

Kakashi won't realy kill Iruka when the seal is broken, will he? That would make for an incredibly angsty story and this one seems .. happier than that. I say keep going. I like it. Good luck.

awww! so sad! i have this doujinshi too and i really liked how you expanded the plot. please write more :)

O.O!! OMG THIS FIC WAS AMAZING!!! you need to update soon PLEASE!!! i loved it the lemon scene was hot. i remember seeing that doujinshi too, I hope this ends happily i a big fan of happy endings ^__^

I hate to be a nay sayer, the story is decent it just seems an awful lot like a doujinshi I've seen. I believe the doujinshi can be found at http://www.fighting-dreamers.org/ .

I read that doujinshi before! I loved it and I was actually thinking of writing a fanfic based on the doujinshi my self. It's nice to know some one beat me to it (I'm more of a reader than a writer.) I even recognized most of the changes you made to it (there wasn't any sex in the doujinshi... naughty naughty! :D)
I'm in love with your story so far, and I can't wait to see what you yourself will write. It shall be very interesting!

OMG, I love it!

I read the doujinshi long time ago lol but at that moment I was sad that didn't have a sequel ;______;

now I'm so happy =3 nyan!!!!

X3 I want another chappie~~!!

X3 I want a jar of cookies~~!!

just kidding... about the cookies >_>


Sorry if my english sucks XD *proudly*... \n_ñ i'll wait for the next update

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