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for Break the Seal

by AshtonRose

person Bianca
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Very well written. Good character development. I definitely look forward to reading the rest of it. Awesome work!

Bianca ;-P
person ayachan
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, noooooooo.. they have to fall in love!!!!!!!!!!! wow, great beginning! please update asap and keep up the good work!
person jemu
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O incredible. I just read this doujinshi not too long ago and let me tell you, you did an excellent job. I loved the details and the characters. It's kool. Please continue, I would love to know what happens to these two !!
person Raiko
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWAAAAWWWWWSSSSOOOOMMMMEEEEE!!!!!!
SERIOUSLY!!! WOW! *Okay enough with the yelling thing here..^^*
Damn! That was really fantastic...*would you mind letting me recover from your fic a sec...all I seem to be able to say is: awsome, fantastic, incredible and awsome...well you get the picture..héhé*
That was a cute and pretty original. Jeez, you're a great author!...Shish, I really loved your thing and sincerely, I rarely get 'that' overwhelmed by other stories, and I have to say that yours did the trick BIG TIME!!!
I really don't know if I'll be able to wait for your next chap...I know I'm asking a lot..but PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE HURRY UP!!!!HÉHÉ=^_^=
Oh and one more thing...if anyone ever flames you for this fic (though I personnaly think it's just impossible)..let me know I'll hack their systems and tey'll get real flames alright!!!!Mouaouahahahahah..*okay a little carried away here...sorry stupid brain took over..*
Well..keep on going...IT'S AWSOME!!!..*I'm sure I already said that somwhere..*=^.^=
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki