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This is relly good stuff. I just want to know what happens it's so good.^_^
Keep going and I hope you make it a long story.
Good luck and best wishes.
Butterfly Beauty

Some how, I'm not surprised that Eterna turned out to be a girl. But I am surprised that Sakura was crushing on her. I wonder where it is that you're going to take this. This fic certainly is getting interesting. I wasn't expecting the big bad vampire creature to be killed off so soon. Does that mean that Ebony will be the threat of the village?? And what about Shikamaru? Will he figure out that she isn't quite human any more?? He is a genius after all. Anyway, I better stop my questions right here. I think you get that I like the fic so far. Hope that you update soon. Ja ne!

Sorry. I dont review fics often and when I do, I tend to ask lots of questions. Well, at least I know who the 'out of it girl' is. ^^ Very curious to know who the boy is though. Hope you let us know soon. And its so much easier to read now. Thanks. Poor Naruto, the first girl really interested in him and she's a vamp. Ah well. It balances with his demon!XP Update soon! Really, love your writing.

Much better!! Very easy to read now. And that ending was greatly improved. Good job! *Gives ya chocolates* Looking forward to the next chap. Very curious to know who that boy was that they were fighting. My guess is that he's the enemy Ebony was warned against?
By the way, thanks for the acknowledgement. *Blows kiss to ya* I appriciate that.

wow, this is pretty good, though it was a little difficult to read. You may want to fix that. So who are those two?? The out of it girl and the boy with the girly voice?? That fighting scene was quite funny by the way. And why did Sakura get all huffy when Naruto tried to help that girl out?? Is she that oblivious to others conditions?? Or did she just get jealous? Naruto showing interst in a different girl and all? Anyway, hope that you update soon. Your writing skills are really good.

yayness up posted i dont have time to read it just yet i have to go to work! its 8:00am i dint find out you posted till today! gahh

Great story! Really do love the part where the stranger takes Kakashi's book during the fight. Thats got to be my favorite scene. I laughed so hard when I first read that part! But, just a tip, you may want to go through and add some space between paragraphs. Its kind of difficult to read. Anyway, cant wait to read more! XP