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by khelil

person Wessle-kun
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great can't wait tell you update is so hard to find good KisameX Itachi or at least written well, not that I know what I'm talking about I write like shit...
person kkkkkkkkkk
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you decided to write a sequal. I can never get tired of Kisaita, even if it is only one chapter so far. *hinhint*
person blisblop
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All your writing just reinforces how unusual the enounter was and how hard hit Kisame is by this fact.It also makes Itachi more seductive then ever,even with him topping from the bottom.Great addition to the legend.You write smoothly and treat your characters with respect,staying as IC as possible.I wonder if Itachi will ever loose control or will that be the day he dies?Good luck on the rest of this challenge,I am looking forward to it .Thanks.
person just_me
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No wonder Itachi smirks. We now all know what Kisame uses to get his hair all spikey. :P ;)
Nah, just kiddin'. You have a way to keep the characters in character. It would be worse if Kisame and Itachi suddenly became as horrible as Gai and Lee, calling out each others name and then hug. You're way of writing down passion also is very nice. I hope you keep writing Kisame/Itachi stories. I'll be looking out for the next.