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person Aikei-chan
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! *squeel*


I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!

*hands a cookie* can you make a Kakairu lemon followup to this? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE?
person fyredevyl
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, that was cute. Poor Naruto getting molested all the time when he was trying to get the adults to molest each other.
A couple things, I think you meant this "cue" instead of "queue". Iruka is still a chuunin I believe. A couple spelling mistakes, but that always happens.
This was a really great story. And as to reading more Kakashi and Iruka stories to find out more about their personalities, I wouldn't rely on other fanfics. Go to the source, either the manga or the anime.
Good Job! ^_^
person asdf
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo KAWAII!!! ^^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very clever and funny, with a cute ending -- keep up the good work!!!
person Leasan
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooow, how cute!
And hilarious!!
Great job, even though it's more sasuNaru than KakaIru :) Which is just fine with me XD
person just_me
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so much fun to read and such a cute ending. The 'ouchouchouchouch' part must be Naruto complaining about the marathon Sasuke had on (or should I say 'in') him, right? :P