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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was GREAT and I LOVEd the end... just goes to show how smart Shikamaru really is!!
TemaXShika is an AWESOME pairing I just LOVE them together.. XD
TemaXShika is an AWESOME pairing I just LOVE them together.. XD
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha! sexy. and shikamaru... what a sly dog >:) *evil grin*
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Excellent descriptions, and I really like the competition that came into play. Especially at the end, when we found out how tricky Shikamaru really is.. XD There were some spelling mistakes ('site' instead of 'sight', etc), but nothing too huge.
Once again, great story!
Once again, great story!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock. This was excellent. Shikamaru's finally learning a thing or two about women, or at least Temari, I like that.
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! I love Shika/Temari and there are simply not enough of them out there. Keep up the good work. Is this a one shot? or it is something that will be continued? Either way, it was still great. Please more Shika/Temari I really liked your style. Awesome job!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.........that's all I can really say is wow. That was FREAKING AMAZING! The descriptions were great. Even though I'm not a huge fan of Temari/Shikamaru pairings (cuz Shika is my sexy bitch), your one-shot was great! Keep on writing!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! What a shithead! poor Temari didn't stand a chance! hahahahaha!!! Very good, I am still grinning.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, that was awesome, especially with the final lines