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for Midnight Jitsu!

by xxdedxx

schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD omg i love it!!!! i love starting my day with coffee and sasunaru...you made me happy ^__^
person kitana
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this greatly amusing and sexy. XD Ahh, Sasuke, that tease. ^__^ And no to mention that Kakashi-sensei even figured it out!
person lstdpntght
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good... really nice. *wishes to have your imagination*
person Leasan
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAH!!! Oh yeah, poor little Sakura, so lost! Heh :)
As always, your fic is simply irresistible, so damn sexy and funny at the same time!
I found a few typos and some weird grammar/style parts. Just thought you'd like to know about those.
I love the way you portray Sasuke and Naruto, they are so damn cute together.
And I can't wait to read that multichaptered SasuNaru fic!!!! Yupi!
Keep up the great work!
person Fan
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the bye... I think you mean Naruto face faulted, not face vaulted. See: http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Face+Fault
person Fan
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh- and of course, I really liked this one! Really funny! I liked how you portrayed the characters, too.
person Fan
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, sorry. The face faulting line is right at the end there, when Kakashi says something about 'getting action' and Naruto face faults in reaction. (Heh- I noticed because I really like Kakshi's line there!)
person Arryelle
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOHHHHHHH AHHHHHHH such hot and steamy sexyness yum I loved it
You fill up my extremely large appetite for yaoi sex Thankies

Loves arry
person alex\'s little duckling
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! i laughed so very hard! and i agree, sakura does suck. Hardcore.....like a whore on crack! Way to go!

person Sukara
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD Yay!! More one-shots!! =D -Huggles her fic- x3