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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... this is a tough one. I didn't like the beginning or the ending too much, but everything in between was really good. So... I dunno. 3 and 1/2 stars out of my five? o_o'
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! I'll have to go read the others later... but for now, I'm going to go sleep (although I really should be in Japanese right now....)
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgosh.. poor Naruto.. Sasuke just left him. thats so cruel.... it made me cry....
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was well done. First of all that was hot, and the psychological drama was great. Keep up the good work.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smut. Pure unadulterated PWP-ness. ^.^;;; Yet, despite the fact that it starts out startlingly abrupt and continues to keep you off-kilter with OOC-ness and the characters flips in attitude, there's something oddly captivating in the fic. *L* Your description of the sex is refreshingly blunt and straight forward, even if we are just thrown right into it.
And, like Naruto, we're left wondering just what the hell Sasuke was up to. *blinks*
This fic could almost do with a sequel to explain it, or even just Neji and Sasuke having their way with Naruto, who's all confused and wants to dom but is out numbered. *L*
And, like Naruto, we're left wondering just what the hell Sasuke was up to. *blinks*
This fic could almost do with a sequel to explain it, or even just Neji and Sasuke having their way with Naruto, who's all confused and wants to dom but is out numbered. *L*
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah. Sasuke, you whore. :D
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is that all there is? No, another chapter?
Oh well, I loved the little twiseted story, coolsa.
Oh well, I loved the little twiseted story, coolsa.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! All the way through, right up until the end I thought Naruto was being a bit... forceful...
But Sasuke was so horrid! But he'll be back, (She tells her inner self, to try and calm the rage!)
Damn, but I still can't hate him... he's just too cute!
Balafeo
But Sasuke was so horrid! But he'll be back, (She tells her inner self, to try and calm the rage!)
Damn, but I still can't hate him... he's just too cute!
Balafeo
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww the ending was so good for some reason XD sad but good. Very nice scene! Good job ^^
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh......an unexpected ending! ^___~ very well done -- keep up the good work!!!