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for You Win

by Potemkin

person jaaf
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was excellent! You must continue. Very good smut :D
person Fan
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. BURN. LOL. Please say this isn't a oneshot??? I mean, its fun enough to be one... but I want to see what happens next. :) Ja na!
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. The lemon was so good, but the ending...so sad. I hope that there is more to come, the ending there left me kind of...depressed. Really though, this is really good so far. I look forward to future chapters. Update soon kay?
person vampchic
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay me not happy, I just wrote you a review and it sent itself before I could put my name in. >.< The review I wrote is the one with the email address vamp_blood1@yahoo.com. Not too happy about that at all. Great fic you have here. Waiting for more.
person oOKeairaOo
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... well, damn. You can't leave it like that, can you? Surely there's another chapter...?

Amazing lemon, by the way.
person Catullus
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If only all NaruSasus were as good as this one. But alas, they are not. But it's rare fics like this one that keep us horney fangirls searching in breathless anticipation. There better be another chapter. Or I will come over there and kick your sorry ass. -Me
person Sasuke Fangirl #343
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smut in every sense. Loved it!
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW o_O...that's fricking sad. >_>;;..Sasuke's such a fucking tease and a bastard leaving Naruto like that @_@;;.