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I found this to be a very well written story and the descriptions were vivid. I was in no way disappointed by the ending, Kakashi is a pervert after all, and he would only give what he wanted to keep his student happy, well not so happy, but satisfied?
My only concerns are that you failed to research your topic.
Victims of Hypothermia should never be given a *hot* showers, baths or drinks. In fact you never give any fluids to them. Also, they must be kept from any form of walking. Barring that, It was a great theme to go with. Any teenage boy would recover fast, but with his build and size the condition would not be hard to believe of the skinny little Uchiha boy.
I only bring up these point to show that in writing of this sort, giving faulty information could cause some potential harm. If some one read it and actually came in contact with a person in need and improperly treated them. Hypothermia is a dangerous condition.
Keep up the writing, I will keep reading. Love it so far.

Whoa. I’m amazed to see consensual sex coming from your corner. “Stone Cold” has def been one of my favorite porny fics of late. This one was still friggin’ sad, though. The lemon was a bit vague for my taste, but I guess that wasn’t so much the point with this one. I enjoyed it, but then I usually do when Sasuke gets hurt.

You mentioned requests?

I’d totally like to see some Neji/Sasuke. It’s very hot, and they’ve similar problems – major anger issues, curse seals that are ruining their lives, the inability to back down from a fight, and hella bitchy attitudes. I can see somebody commenting on the Sharingan evolving from/being a weaker version of the Byakugan, Sasuke arguing that the Byakugan is crappier, that leading to a fight between said Uchiha and said Hyuuga, and naturally, a fight leading to violent, non-consensual sex.

I’d also totally like to see a non-con Kabuto/Sasuke during the couple years the manga skips. You know, Sasuke getting injured during training, Kabuto healing him and then raping a drugged-out half-conscious Sasuke in the hospital room...

"Sasuke and Itachi get in a fight at a carnival and have sex among the dangerous machinery of the rides and cotton candy while clowns watch."

Hmmm...that's not a bad idea. Except, I like: Sasuke and Itachi fight with each other, verbally, while raping Hiei on a dangerous carnival ride. My personal favorite is "The Sizzler". After that, they rape and murder all the clowns, while sharing the cotton candy. Of course, after that, Itachi fucks Sasuke in the ass with the paper cone that the cotten candy came on.

nyuuuuu! poor sasuke! -o- I really like KakaSasu and this is actually the second m/m fiction I've read.

Cold was just that, cold as in Kakashi's 'tude.If Mr. I read porn all day was just gonna humiliate the kid why bother,ahh cause he can?Good line about bringing him off so fast,pro crack,no one would argue he is a pro manipulator.I guess he will get away with using the kid like that Sasuke will never complain.You sure know how to show Kakashi as pustual ridden prick with delusions of grandure.Sasuke pushed thats true...ick.Very well done however,superior even.I myself have been awake too long ,not criticiseing here,just reacting.Your stuff hasP O W E R . Idea.Ok.Itachi is injured extremities,lil Sas has to stitch him up a bit.Drugs him,Itachi floates and this can either go I of 2 ways(oh,he is tied willingly so he doesn't bounce when Sasuke stiches treats him))))) First Sas gets kinda out of it enough to play and basicly through seeing or experiancing it to a degree gets Itachis ass,he(Ita) has to be belly down for this,but poor aniki hasn't come(Sasuke isn't that long yet but now he is losened/lubed up) so sasuke reaches inside to find his postate here by discovering fisting or))))) secondly.He is injured all adults gone(hey maybe its the night Orochimaru left or came back,some major battle anyway/disaster so the bros are alone and Itachi tops from the bottom,maybe the adults left him tied up cause he is under a jutsu they can not lift till they get back,any port.. heh heh )So the above happens but itachi uses an eye jutsu but I want it to be a damn surprise to Itachi at some point when Sasuke takes his idea and runs with it getting much more radical cause hey its all new to him and he loves his bro and wants his bro to respect him,see him or Sasuke just is seduced by all that power tied up in front of him.May be the day/week before Itachi fingered his(Sasuke) postate ,he has gotta know somehow,enough to want and to deliver and to rise above.Thats my idea.You seem to be just the person to do this real well and you asked. My humble and messy idea.Oh about the story I loved the hurt/comfort aspect and the sensuality of the physical warming,I did read it as a mental freezing out.Thank you.

I just wonder when an author will write a KakaSasu fic that doesn't make me want to strangle her.

What's wrong with the lot of you that Kakashi always comes out as an insensitive bastard, who for some reason also sucks in bed.

ONE PATHETIC BLOWJOB?! Is that your idea of a hurt/comfort fic, you pathetic talentless loser?!

Kathrine:YAY!! SASUKE LOVERS UNITE!!!
JC: We like this story, deinfitely realistic. Sasuke is lost in a hypothermia-enduced dillusion and ends up letting out things that he shouldn't have. Kakashi pushed him back like a 'responsible' adult, even though he probably wants to jump him.
Kathrine: You could make a sequel of this. Throw in Itachi, non-con, suicidal/homicidal Sasuke, remorseful Kakashi who comes in at the wrong time. What if Itachi used if Mangekyou Sharingan to trick Sasuke in thinking that HE'S Kakashi? Not really non-con, but definite manipulation.
JC: Or could you write a story about Itachi trying to use Sasuke as bait to get to Naruto (who likes Sasuke), but ends up with a Sasuke who doesn't remember anything about Itachi slaughtering their clan or anything like that. A Sasuke who is WAY too devoted to his brother, who of course takes advantage of it. ^_^
Kathrine: We don't usually make requests, but you offered first, and with your beautiful track record for wonderful work...we just couldn't NOT take advantage of it.
JC: You are definitely one of our favorite Sasuke-authors. Most of your stories are short, but still indepth, angsty, hot, and just plain wonderful to read. Can't wait to see what story you write next. Hopefully something dealing with Itachi/Sasuke... *hint*hint*

Aawww~ *sniff* So sweet! Well, sad, mostly, but still sweet!!! ^^ Keep up the good work!!!