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M/M in the het section...gtfo

When I saw the title of this fic and then reading it I just couldnt get the song "Gonna Be" by The Proclaimers
When I wake up, well I know I'm gonna be,
I'm gonna be the man who wakes up next to you
When I go out, yeah I know I'm gonna be
I'm gonna be the man who goes along with you
If I get drunk, well I know I'm gonna be
I'm gonna be the man who gets drunk next to you
And if I haver, hey I know I'm gonna be
I'm gonna be the man who's havering to you

But I would walk 500 miles
And I would walk 500 more
Just to be the man who walked a thousand miles
To fall down at your door...and so on

er..i don't know if someone has already corrcected but kage no yoru means shadows'night or night of shadows...if you want to say shadows of the night it's just "yoru no kage"...voila~
keep writing that's good stuff!^^

This is getting real good! It's cool that you've read Melek In Olum, I love that story too, but updates are sooo slow...hopefully you won't keep us waiting as long? Your writing's great and enjoyable to read, can't wait to see how your tale unfolds. Later! ^_^

Hey! I saw your review on my fic and decided to drop by! Anyway, this is very deep, I like it, and I want to see more of it! You've got talent now show me the money! *Wink*

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SpasticShinigami

What purpose would be good enough?To kill for people who hate you?i recognised the idea,i hope you are gonna have better action in yours,the other had Naruto as a beyond perfect samari jesus christ in it.No sex at all,lots of promices but it was just a huge tease.This sure is a challenge you have set for yourself.good Luck and thanks.

I think more people read this then you know, just many don't review. Melek in Olum is a great story, and I know what idea you are going to borrow, but I want to see your spin on it. I like your setory, and you have a unique way of telling your story, especially the first chapter. I hope at some point you can go back to that style, because that is what brought me into your story in the first place. Well anyway, I'll be waiting for your next update. Ciao!

The human condition is not something we can ever find boring I think.You have a grasp on one we all share(funny that) loneliness.The warmth of self desruction (is it that,or the joy of finally doing something that makes a difference?),you have presented these with a gentle yet compelling(sp) voice I feel.I want you to continue .And don't knock yourself,thats our job!(kidding,I think...)Whatever, Good Luck,be persistant,this is worth it.

I think" soft" is a better word for what i mean than" gentle".Sorry.

this is so sad! but your writing is very poetic and extremely beautiful! I can't wait for your next update!