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Wow. I have to say I love these kind of stories, because it doesn't seem plausible that someone could grow up all alone, with people glaring and whispering behind someones back and not be affected ina bad way by it. I can't see a child growing up alone, with people hating him, and not becoming depressed. I think you have a great start going here, and I hope that you continue. The style in which you tell the story is a nice change from the norm, and I do greatly enjoy how you state his thoughts. Good grammar, nice word choice, and great descriptions. I hope you continue, and that get many great reviews, because I know i'm already a fan of this story. Ciao!

WOW..That was AWESOME,SMASHING....GREAT...
Pleasse continue this fic......Its simply addicting.....Im rooting here for you so do
please continue^ ^

Ah, that was so sad. I really want to walk up to naru-kun and hug him... and kick Sasuke as soon as I can find him.
I really like the story. Everything is fluid and easy to follow. The ending was so sad too... "Am I still yours?" *wipes away tear*
I was ready to push the button for the next chapter...just to find there was only one... so... *fidgets* Whens the next chappie comin'?

your writing is very good and smooth. i like the description, keep it up~ would love to see naru and sasu meeting once again.

Wonderful start! Your writing draws one in smoothly and I was somewhat dissappointed when the chapter ended because I wanted to continue on right away. So don't stop there! Onwards to the next chappie!!!