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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how old is naruto?
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!!! Love it so much!!!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh that was soo cool!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was nice....
really i have never seen or read something this smutty in kakashi/naruto category. nice work!!
really i have never seen or read something this smutty in kakashi/naruto category. nice work!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was an interesting idea for a fic and it involved one of my favourite couples.
There were a few grammar mistakes, though, and (to me) Naruto seemed a bit OOC. It was also rushed. It's a good fic, so slow it down a little and go into more detail.
Other than that, good job. :)
There were a few grammar mistakes, though, and (to me) Naruto seemed a bit OOC. It was also rushed. It's a good fic, so slow it down a little and go into more detail.
Other than that, good job. :)
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was beautiful... in an uncomplete way. i really didn't like the way kakashi didn't prepare naruto proplerly, noone would enjoy using they're own blood as lubricnt, but otherwise ferryferryg00t ^.^
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...nice job on the lemon. ;) I like xD
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeee!!!!!!!!!! Ooh... my crack fix is done for today!!!!! Coz' I like strange pairings, you see. Can you do a ItaKaka for me? I'd like to see/read one. Don't have to though.
~Rai
~Rai
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!! It was GREAT and man there are so FEW Kaka/Naru stories out there...I hope you write another one:D THANKS:D
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good! But, you do know that this is technicly shota, right? An older man (Kakashi) and a MUCH younger man (Naruto). It's even consider to be PED. But it was still good! Keep up the good work!