rate_review Reviews

To the illiterate children above: Don't read a pairing if you don't like it. Also, don't review a pairing you don't like saying "I hate this pairing." It makes you look funny. ^_^

this was too good to be true. you just have to make another sasuke lemon. it doesn't matter what girl. but hopefully one that hasn't been done alot, like this one. please. he needs more love on this website. no offense to the redsilver person and co-writer but they don't give him enough credit.

Well,kinda interesting.Sasuke probably would do better with an older woman,two years is nothing but in your teens it is so.Tamari is hard too like sasuke and he will never be able to push her around.Hey its a good idea and the sex was sensible.(Well,he had better learn where her clit is .hard dicks have little to do with female orgasm eh?Someone better tell him that)Cute fic.Your way of writing didn't bother me at all,the lack of uootation marks I mean.

Great fic, I really love this pairing even though I can all too rarely find any fics on it. Could you continue it or write another one *Please with PUPPY DOG EYES* One point thought I would have pictured Temari as being slightly more aggressive.

Quite good. Temari was tamer than I usually like, but it was a nice story, and more or less believable.

This story was great. This is on par with the great ones. I haven't seen a SasuTema fic in a long time and i can say it's the best one around. Is there going to be another chapter? I sure hope so. If not, please put up another Sasuke fic... Please??

This was a very unexpected pairing but you made it work well. I liked this story very much. I can just see Naruto and Kankuro having to babysit, thats too funny. I've always considered Temari to be Shikamaru's women, but she would be very suited to Sasuke too, so good job on this one. Keep up the good work.