rate_review Reviews

Hi! I love your story so far. that was such a sweet lemon! Also, did you mean telepathic link instead of telekinetic? the former is sharing of thoughts and the second is moving items with the mind.

Also, loved the coffee reference. I have always thought coffee was a gift from the Goddess Caffeina. She of the life giving elixer. Beware though, over imbibing that magical brew will bring down Her wrath - mild trembling, irritability, and sleeplessness....

This story is really wonderfully, well written, original and creative. I love it!

I noticed you haven't update for a while. Please don't stop writing. This is beautiful!

Oh. My. Gosh. I like it! Don't make Itachi die though, please. ;.; ...I just have to ask, any uchihacest going to be in this...? Hehe..

anyway, awesome story!! It's definitely interesting and great! Keep updating!

~Jamie

Hello,sorry for delay,my computer has been down....twice!!!!!!But I wrote alot because of that,so,how do we do this...do I send it hotmail?I have about 8 yes8! At least finished and about 25 minus 8 on the go...so give me a shout,I''ll check here,please hurry as my internet connection will be gone by the &th........the utter PAIN of that.Sighs.I'll check here tomorrow.Your story is getting more and more complex...poor Itachi.

im not all the way through this yet, but i love it so far!!! keep up the wicked work =D (i hope this comes out as sasunaru in the end ;_;)

Wow, this story is A*W*E*S*O*M*E! The second I started reading it, I couldn't stop! Well done! (I hope the next chapter is out soon!)

I read this story and I think it's great. You write so well! I love Mina, and I love the way the plot is moving. It was so funny when Gaara thought Mina was a Sexy no Jutsu'd Sasuke! I loved the part where Gaara spared the assassins, too. Most of all I love the relationship between Itachi and Sasuke and the way you've written it, from Itachi taunting Sasuke about raping Naruto, to Itachi raping Sasuke (I know, I'm twisted, but I loved it), to Itachi dragging Sasuke off and Sasuke watching Itachi deteriorate into madness and being unable to kill his brother while he was whacked out and unable to put up a fight, to Itachi telling him to leave him and meet Mina and Naruto in Sand Village. Sasuke's progressively worsening confusion about what he should do, Itachi's twisted love for Sasuke, Mina... I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter!

i first read the summary and i thougth thats dum but this is a good story i realy want to know whats going to happen so keep up the good work

Hey ,looking good.Gaara is responding well,Neji also.Gawd,whats with Itachi,eyeless...small sob.I have your story done,you'll have it by Sun.Have mercy.Huge smile.