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by Tatemshope

schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't get my reviews to open so I'm trying to come in through the back door... *sigh*
person CP
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON'T apologize for the Sasuke hurting. I have been DYING to read a fic in which Itachi is holding Sasuke captive and brutally, painfully, torturously rapes him for AGES now, ever since I read "Prize: The Heart of Konoha." OMG. OMG. OMG. THANK YOU for writing that sequence. I finally, finally found what it was I wanted so much. GUH. I am going to say THANK YOU now over and over again until my voice gives out and I faint.

*Says THANK YOU over and over again*
*voice gives out*
*THUD*
person blisblop
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is going well. Sasuke seems O.K. I am worried about Itachi,the witch can't kill him till she has her baby,I doubt Sasuke would do that for her,nope,nope,nope. I am working on the story,well 4 at once,hows about I send it in parts as I write?The end of summer means schools up and mine HATES school,can't say I blame her ,I always loved school but the quality of education has dropped so far.Such is life.
person Leasan
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, next chapter, HURRAH FOR THE BETAS!!!!!!
I like the chap a lot, it's fascinating to see the sensitive part of Gaara unfold, even if it's only for Mina for now.
Have you considered Gaara getting closer to Neji? They'd make a really nice pair.
Oh, and I hope that love between Sasuke and Itachi will turn platonic and brotherly in the end, at least on Sasuke's side, really...
I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter and the new developments!!
person Stranj100
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Thanks for the treat.
person hitsuki
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story and I love it!! I'm sorry to hear about your beta...I'm not quite sure what a beta does but it sounds a lot like editing (I edit my sisters stories, so I've got experience^^) I don't normally do this but I like your story and if you'd like my help I'll be glad to lend it^^
person Kurama Crazy
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you tell me what a beta does I might be able to help.
person DancingKitsune
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seeing how this fic is the awesomeness, and I dun mind helping out every once in a while, I wouldnt mind helping with yer beta issue. You could send it to me at SailorBrittS@aol.com and I'll send it back as soon as I'm done

~lina~
person Stranj100
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, kissing and groping in a moonlit desert. How romantic. Now if only Sasuke weren't so tired and Naruto so concerned, it could've gotten very hot, I think. *Sigh* I guess I'll wait patiently for some citrus flavouring.
person S2
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!! I really hope that Itachi will NOT die...-_- Its so sad....