rate_review Reviews

I have no idea why I have never read your story before, but man! I'm glad I did, finally!!
It's AMAZING!! Just wonderful, finally a story in which sasuke and Itachi don't act like total morons
and start to grow up emotionally!
After all, they are brothers, no matter what, they're familly!
I've read all 15 chapter at once, so it's difficult to praze all the things I love about your writing.
In this last chapter, I loved the eyeliners and goth part :) oh and there were a few really hilarious moments, like with Gaara being totally ignored, and confused sweet!!
Pleas update ASAP!! I'm simply enchanted by your fic!!

Are you using a real language for the witch language? Is that welsh? I love the story BTW.

I enjoy it muchly. Mmm, but the chapter I'm on. Mina seems just a tad too powerful for my tastes. So powerful, in fact, that I don't see it being much of a battle.

And now you have me in a state of SASUKE*sobs*. ....good story :). I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well you twisted the story line again, you are full of surprises,so cool.I am getting timid about saying anything to anyone anymore cause I don't wanta hurt feelings and I don't want to treat them like idiots either....but at least you guys are posting and that takes alot.Like I said I knew what elements I wanted to put in my reveiw but I confused my responce with another story,I don't think yours has' slowed down 'is an example and heck,this sure proved it. ighs.I hope this makes it clearer.Anyhoo on with the reveiw.Gaara is in the spot light,I like his reaction to her.I was shocked and happy to hear Sasuke'sresponce to Itachi,its gonna be amazing to see where this goes.Happy face with leer.Thanks.I hope you still wanna be friends?I do!Want me to send you something I have written so you can have at it?Its Itachi/Sas o'course....

Jeez.I mixed up my last reveiw with another story,I woke up and started typing so please delete / ignore.So sorry.You must think I am pychotic!Not really... just distracted.

I read the whole thing this morning and i lived it! Though I'm a little confused.. you mean itachi loved mina or sasuke? Either way its quite a surprise turn.. I'm totally wondering who are "they". Great story so far, the way itachi thinks love and everything makes him want to vomit is .. XD Continue soon!

I am sorry that this happened,I am gonna check out these reveiws and get back to you.Oh SCREW stopping.No dearest,I am positive there are more of us enjoying this than not ,33:2 in favour for YOU!Reviewers sometimes have bad days too.I put my foot in it massively about a week ago and was astonished that the person thought I didn't like their writing when it was a derailment of logic I was bemoaning.So,chin up,the most important thing is to get back in the saddle.Don't worry about quality right now,just get your nerve back.Lots of us are rooting for you.I for one am becoming oddly fond of ditzed out Itachi....

This adultfanfiction.net. If they wanted something that wouldn't offend them they should look elsewhere.
I didn't find it offensive, there was a rape seen, but at the end Sasuke wasn't all like "ZOMG. I love you now!"
Just look for any constructive critism in the emails and take it to heart.

P.S. Please delete the note when you post the next chapter, it's really annoying to have a author's note right in the middle of a fic.

I don't know what kind of hate mail that was, but screw'em, lol.
I thought your idea for Itachi having a twin, and how that twin turned out and all, I thought they were all really neat, original ideas.
Not to mention I'd love to see if poor Naru and Suke manage to get it together, too.
And how everything else turns out. ( :
C'mon, write, lol. You said you would if only one person said somefin'.
::is only one person::
lol.
Don't feel badly, I think you write well, and your ideas.. those're really something I hope I can come up with myself someday.
<3Jaxxy<3!!! !! !