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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't give up I was really getting into your story, the people who don't like it don't know what their talking about. I would still very much like to read more.^_^
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't care about those flamers! they are people who have nothing better to do and act AS IF they can write better. Everyone likes different styles and forms of writing and there are many people who like yours, like me! please continue!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue, people will always hate you. Don't let that stop you. Just as there are always going to be writers better than you, there will always be people who flame or critique ( I dunno what the e-mails said, so I can't assume ). 'N while maybe some of the harshest things have a grain of truth to them, to stop is letting them win. Do you want that?
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Wow. Can you believe I never read your story because I thought it was bad. Well, I guess it teaches me that I'm an idiot. ^^;;;
I read all the chapters and I have completely fallen in love. I wanna jump Itachi and smooch him and kill Mina. I don't like her one bit.
So please, continue writing. You have yourself another faithful reader. ^__^V
I read all the chapters and I have completely fallen in love. I wanna jump Itachi and smooch him and kill Mina. I don't like her one bit.
So please, continue writing. You have yourself another faithful reader. ^__^V
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just gotta say i used to stop reading this story once i read itachi had a sister.. in chapter one XD i don't like self-made characters but i guess mina's alright. great story! i'll love to see how itachi is going on from here. I loved that part where he just yelled SAND! THERE YOU F***KING HAPPY? and sasuke thought he went balooney. keep it going!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I enjoy the story, and the plot is fantastic. Your writing style is something that I haven't run across often, and when I do, it always makes for a wonderful story. I will be patiently awaiting the next chapter and good luck with writing it. :)
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did not get the mail.Nice Sasuke/Itachi set up,I hope hope hope more happens between them, though you have Sasuke in love with Naruto however Naruto got brought off nicely by Itachi with no violence and I'm sure he isn't all cut up about it.Itachi isn't his bro. But here in fan land thats probably a disadvantage ,not having a brother to lust over you.Does that make any sense at all?I have been up 36 hours and counting.So I am sorry to give such a stilted weird reveiw but life is doing one of its shimmies on me right now.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best.Chapter.Yet. You were right!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, just go witrh what you want :P.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm. How about "What happens when Itachi starts to lose control and his brother and Naruto fight back." IF I win, I would like to see a GaaNeji. I actually really like the thought of them being in Naruto's bed with him asleep in the room. That was a good idea!