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Mm, I liked this story in the beginning. I guess i'll just have to see where it goes from here... but nuuu ><; mina/naru is just.. er x_x; well lets just say it's too close to a marysue for my comfort. But then hey, *shrug* it's your fic, do what you want.

Mm, I liked this story in the beginning. I guess i'll just have to see where it goes from here... but nuuu --; mina/naru is just.. um x_x; well lets just say it's too close to a marysue for my comfort. But then hey, *shrug* it's your fic, do what you want.

That was a good rewrite. I like it better with her being sisterly toward him. I think you should keep that up. I'm really hoping for Naruto to get with Gaara. He HAS to be in here. He just has to. Can you email me when you update?

Is this going to be NejiSasu?

I didn't reveiw.Itachi's ungraceful retreat....i believe itachi better move sasuke somewhere his sister will not be able to find him or Itachi might be dead.Neji is an idiot,do what the guy wants for gods sake but he blew it,for someone to try to heal themselves so quick is probably rare,of course this is gonna ruin any chance of them being together no matter what Sasuke won't forgive this(?).I want Sasuke with Itachi,you seem to have the witch with Naruto but he loves Sasuke.Well if you can get the bros together for some unviolent or Sasuke as the initial aggressor sex, that would make me so happy.This is getting more and more complecated and it looks like anything could happen.Good Luck.Itachi's being in character...nobody has a clue to his character so don't worry about that for the important things he is in character.So don't sweat that anymore cause he is showing cracks explains it.Somehow I hope Naruto doesn't tell the witch child about Sasuke,if she tries to go into his memories He could always hide in Kyubi's(?).

woot anther chapter. and naruto and mina are becoming friends. but sasuke... I feel sorry for him. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. ^_^

Pairing?Itachi and Sasuke Of course.That dynamic is always compelling .Yup.Friends.Sure!

YAY! Neji's back. I was beginning to think he wa the poor boy locked in Minas basement thast the other reviewer mentioned. I don't know how you would work it in but my favorite person to pair with Naruto is Gaara so if you want suggestions that is what I suggest. If that doesn't work Sasuke and Neji are my second favorite and I suppose Naruto could get with Mina. Jus some thoughts, you know?

Hey,Sure I still do.I'm cool.I still like him,he is very confusing,he seems unbalenced(,he fell of the bed,ha ha,thats cute when you think about it ...the sister making him crazy,well he's gotta suck it up,he missed one)and dangerous but not brutally sadistic/cold.A spanking...that was kinda hot...yeah that was hot.Surprised me it did,he's just a little freaky.Gotta love that.Thanks for the favour!ps.i know the sister is not suposed to be,I think,creepy but for some reason she is,the threat from her to our characters or just the reality you have put forth with her power,thats just dangerous...plus she dehydrated Naruto,I mean really,forget anyone chained in a basement chick?Bet they are really dryed out by now.Again, fast paced sexy/scary with an effortless edge I enjoy.Weeeeeee!

Itachi is out of character but I'm still really interested in this fic. While it may not be true to the Naruto characters, it's a great read!