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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You have had a problem with run on sentences that pretty bad for a while. There was a major improvement in the last chapter though. You've really got my attention. Keep it up! I want to hear more.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please updat e please please plwa
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is as wonderful as every chapter so far have been keep up the great work.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I think it's safe to say that I am quite addicted to this story.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's both cute and angsty at the same time. You've had me on my toes for awhile now and when I woke up this morning I was so happy to see that you had posted another chapter. Keep the good writing spirit up!!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad u updated plz finish this i need to know whats going to happen to poor naru-chan
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Sasuke and Naruto can speak together in thought. That should make for some very interesting situations! ^^ Let me guess, the future Sasuke saw was with him and Naruto? And Naruto's new appearance sounds cute! But the villagers obviously wont like the new change. They will be all the more reminded of the kyuubi. So does that mean that Naruto will continue staying with Sasuke even after he is healed to stay safe? Cant wait for the next update babe. Dont wait on it too long kay? Later
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW.. I love this story and couple... keep up the good work.....
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg ^_^ eeii I love this story!! you are really good!! UPDATE!! please?
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Naruto-kun!!! He is very strong he will pass it!! I love it!! Update soon!!! ^____^
My rate: +++++
My rate: +++++