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SWEEt!!! GREAT chapter...I LOVE Iruka he's just so CUTE!!! oh man I'm ENJOYING a Naru/Sasu fanfic...now I know the world is going to end...LOL...oh my..>THANKS:D

I definately like your story, really like the plot and I like mpreg stories. They keep saying that Naruto looks so feminine, does that mean that Naruto is going to become a female? I think the only problem I have with this chapter is that some things are awkwardly worded and I wish that a bit more had happened, but the second isn't really so much of a problem as the first. Of course there was the other problem I had earlier, I think Naruto was a little too quick to give up his secret. From what I've seen of rape victims, the either tend to be more than willing to talk because they want the rapists to pay or they tend to make it really hard for anybody trying to find out what happened. Naruto being quiet for three years while this happened and then quickly giving it up to Sasuke seemed a little unrealistic to me. But nevermind, I could be wrong. Anyways good job and please update soon:)

I find myself getting more and more drawn into this story. Its really good stuff. I love how the two are slowly getting closer to each other. And I also love how much Sasuke is worrying over him. The two really are made for each other. Cant wait for the next update. Hope that it'll be soon. Really, this is a great story here.

that was AWESOME GREAT GREAT chapter...But YIKES Poor Naruto man oh man...can't wait to see his reaction to moving in w/Sasuke

yeah anther chapter. I hope this will help him. he needs to know that poeple care. ^_^

Oh please please continue this story, is so cool!! I love it!! It will have lemon?? I hope it will have!!! I love it!! But Sasuke-kun is a bit out of character.... Naruto is perfect!! I understand it, Sasuke is more difficult than Naruto :D

My rate for you: +++++

Nice long chapter. Hope the other chaps will be just as long. Pretty good chap too. So now Naruto is to stay with Sasuke. How will Naruto take this news?? I get the feeling that he'll be relieved, at least once he gets passed being pissed at being off activing duty and all. In the summery, you said that Naruto is merging with the Kyuubi. Is the merging why Naruto is having all these nightmares and all?? Hope you update soon, cant wait to read more!

Hey, nice fic!
Though you made some typos such as "were" instead of "we're" or "there" instead of "their"/"they're", I guess.
I don't really like POV's changing all the time but well... I guess I can cope with that. I'd prefer if the narrator told the larger part of the story.
Oh, and isn't it a bit strange that Naruto told sasuke his terrible story so easily, all of the sudden he opened up and told him everything and in such a straight and dry way... God, rape is such traumatic experience...
Well, I like the story anyway so keep writing!!
I'm curious what's going to happen next and how the Sasu/Naru realationship will evolve!

Well, I think that that is a very good reason for Naruto to hate nobles. Having them have their way with him for three years would certainly haunt the poor boy. And now Sasuke knows. What well Sasuke do exactly with this information?? And how will Naruto react when their relationship starts to get physical?? Being raped for three years has got to cause the boy to have some issues about sexual contact. The fic's pretty good so far, though a little more detail would still be nice. Anywho, update soon please.

interesting Beginning...why is a good title cause it definately brings up that question ALOT