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for It is wrong but I don't care

by Trollmia

person Saskie
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T__T That was a long chapter... You should split it up, otherwise then that everything else was great ;)
person pimptroyce (not loged in cuz im a lazy s.o.b.)
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was 3901! BOOYAH!!! whoa, I love this story, I seriously do. I'll be honest, I've seen it before and didn't want to read it because I thought it was an odd pairing but GOD am I glad I took a chance!!! I soo love you for writting, I'll be looking out for more work by you.

P.S. Kakashi is my favorite and I think you protrayed him wonderfuly!
person Vanessa
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!!!!!!! I love this fanfic...so full of emotion and stress oh god I love it!
person Sterling
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! Wow....Kakashi is a old perv.....but atleast he is a very cute one!! i really like the way u had Kakashi wanting Hinata for so long, even to the fact that before their mission, he wasted 2 hours jacking off in the BR!!! I really liked this one-shot.....hopefully u will make it into a two-shot!!!! :-)
person Kiki12
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another Kakashi/Hinata ficcie I read, and this one I enjoyed very much. Make more of these fanfics with this pairing, one of my favourites I should say!:)
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it, good story. Could use some improvement with the formatting and sentances etc etc but that's not all that important. :)
person Tiamat
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I like this pairing hehe...You should think about doing a sequal...Neji's reaction would be welll very amusing to say the least hehe. BTW Great job on keeping the charactesr, In Character! Its amazing how few fanfic authors are able to do that!
person whocares?
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha! There should be more of this...:D
person Onin
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just manage to read one of your other fic, and it really is great. ^_^

Wasn't expecting to find a Kakashi Hinata pairing, but I can't deny that this fic is awesome, and so is your plot.
A good combination of adult humor and a sweet romance. Definitely a great fic, keep up the good work. XD

It may need some editing, but it really doesn't matter to me, I really get what you are trying to portray in your scenes, and I enjoy it very very much. >_O
person Rachel
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so cute! Kudos on a very good job :)