rate_review Reviews

This is such a good fic that I had to read it again. Okay so there are so grammatic off but the jist is clear. I really do like this pairing, I wish there were more on them. Awesome reading, thanks!

This is awesome! I really liked it. I got the feeling about this pairing during the episode where first met her. Great job!

its was cute! i really liked this story. yours seems to be the only Kabuto/Shizune story I can find here... if you know of any other can you please send me their links? thanks in advance

A very good story! I can't wait to see more from you! That ending really choked me up.

*faints* it looks like you've done it again...damn girl!! i need some tips from you! OMFG!!

Coincidentally, I love corn! The wrapping up was a little out of place, but being able to make things that would never happen, happen is the great joy of fiction... Yay for the happy ending!

Dang. I just read that huge ass post up there... Well, not all of it, but DANG!
Yeah, so maybe good writing is, well, good. I mean seriously, of course it is! But, that kid/guy/girl (I should of just used "they." -__- Oh well.) took things waay too seriously. It's not like anyone that matters is gonna be reading these fics... Besides, you seem like the type who's just starting off, much better to let us be. (I'm a beginner too.) (Damn, how do spell that again?!?!)
So yeah, well... I'm not flaming them or anything... Just, well, an honest comment coming from actual interest in the matter...

this pairing is so special and unique. i think this can be a turn-on or turn-off for some people. I don't have much constructive comments, because I don't write that well too. LOL. anyway, i think the only problem with the story is the punctuation for the speaking part... what happened to the inverted commas?

unique pairing rocks!

I like it. It's well written and the pairing is different from usual. Still, I don't think the plot fit the pairing. Kabuto was too sweet and honest, the story of him being forced to become evil was too convenient. The ending was too perfect as well. However, for a one-shot, it's a good fic.