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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The drabble was very cute, and it is possible to write smut with less than 500 words. :D I was forced to learn that when I joined Snarry100 on LJ. Anyhoo, I really enjoyed this. Fluff is good once in awhile. Ja Ne
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww i think it's so sweet! but... what do u like? u could right a story afterthat or before leading to that...
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Au contraire, love it, love it. ( :
I love fluff and that was really the only G rated fluff I believe I've seen that still managed to be shounen-ai.
So well thank you for writing it, even if you despise it. I don't.
<3Jaxxy<3!!! !! !
I love fluff and that was really the only G rated fluff I believe I've seen that still managed to be shounen-ai.
So well thank you for writing it, even if you despise it. I don't.
<3Jaxxy<3!!! !! !
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaawww that was so sweet. I loved it. keep up the good work.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xDDDDDD I read this and was like, "Ahh...wtf...?" xDDD The ending was just so random. Like you needed to throw in male loving before it was over. Though, <.< I know you did. xD It just seemed to abrupt. I mean, they were just gonna duel it out, they don't seem to have to kind of personalies that would forgot it that fast and wanna hold hands, even more so cause it's hot and sticky. [x.x] Even if they were in love and stuff, it'd would seem more in charater if they had a bit of witty banter and a bit of insulting first before the hand holding. xD Other then the ending just being, "THERE!" I liked it. The begining was cute and I DO like your style. <3 n_n
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
[GOD DANG IT. It always cuts off my Reviews. It keeps going. xD] <.< I know you did. xD It just seemed to abrupt. I mean, they were just gonna duel it out, they don't seem to have to kind of personalies that would forgot it that fast and wanna hold hands, even more so cause it's hot and sticky. [x.x] Even if they were in love and stuff, it'd would seem more in charater if they had a bit of witty banter and a bit of insulting first before the hand holding. xD Other then the ending just being, "THERE!" I liked it. The begining was cute and I DO like your style. <3 n_n
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
[I feel like a retard xDDDD] I know you did. xD It just seemed to abrupt. I mean, they were just gonna duel it out, they don't seem to have to kind of personalies that would forgot it that fast and wanna hold hands, even more so cause it's hot and sticky. [x.x] Even if they were in love and stuff, it'd would seem more in charater if they had a bit of witty banter and a bit of insulting first before the hand holding. xD Other then the ending just being, "THERE!" I liked it. The begining was cute and I DO like your style. <3 n_n
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aawww...it was sweeet...it has a promising ending! ^^ It's okay to leave people imagine what could happen next once in a while (though there's no doubt as to what, but really HOW they're going to do it....XD) good job