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OMG how could you just leave us hanging. You have got to get the chapter out soon!!!

Very good! Love the idea.

Question, when is sasuke gonna find out that Naruto has the curse seal and he's gonna die in six months and shouldn't he have saw it that nght when they were having sex????

i'm really enjoying this fic your doing a great job writing it so keep it up can't wait for the next chapter and update soon

Hey.Keep this up.Its cool.Very different,well written,intreging.More,definetly! I mean, what happened?

your story is great!!!! But why end it at a good part.....the pain of having to wait. Keep up the good work

I would say that this ifc is really nice but i'm kinda confused at the moment. Who's on whose side? It was surprising and confusing to see Kiba and Kankuro as the guards. >_> so yea I think maybe you should just specify that this is an AU. ^_^ other than that i luv it. =D

No, I don't think this is too fast or too slow, it's good and it keep us on our toes. Just a little bit surprise when we see Kiba and Kankuro as guard. I tough "what the fuck? Aren't they Konoha and Sand shinobi?" Coz the first chapter doesn't show that it's an AU, I though it was the futur. But it's cool, I like it! Your writing skills are good! They are some characters that I don't like as Hinata or Sakura in her love-stuck-Sasuke mode, but one I really HATE is Orochimaru, and again, in your story, you put some salt in it. :). But of course, being a french SasuNaru fan, all stories with this pairing, well written and, if possible, without character death (I mean Sasuke and Naruto, I don't care for the others) is good for me, ok maybe not, but yours is! I'm rambling, so I'll stop here. Good luck for the next chapter and continue with this long chapter with a lot of description. Ja!

I really like what you have set up so far in the story, the plot sounds really cool. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

the story is great!! i love it!!! what going to happen to naruto, is he going to be kidnapped?! im looking forward for the next ch. PLEASE UDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Very interesting! I love it! Poor Naruto...I hope he survives! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! GREAT STORY!!