rate_review Reviews

This is good and all, but after chapter 9, it got kinda................. Boring.

So this is something new I never thought about a group going into Konoha and spying then trying to take it over without a fight.. I guess the Ero-Ero shinobis are the best of the best and Konoha ninja's are not the best that they could be and why did you make Kist die because she failed but now Shino will be all alone and no woman to love him... Plus Naruto is in a cell and Hinata doesn't know what to do.. Plus Beki is with the enemy and they don't suspect her to be with them so she is there information for now.. Hope to see an update from you soon...

i like it so far are u going to make more because i want to kno what happens to everyone its so exciting

I liked the ending in this last chapter.

oh shit oh shit oh shit OH SHIT!!!!!! NOO THIS IS NOT RIGTH AT ALL GODAMNIT NOOOO!!!

Nice chapter. Better written than the ones before.

yes i thot u quited i wa sabout to flkame till u made it back I LLUV U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NARUTO HE MUSNT FALL!!!!!!!!!

[Word From The Author]
I will try to make longer chapters, but don't ever send me anymore EMAILS TELLING ME TO CHANGE IT COMPLETELY AND TO REWRITE IT AGAIN.
%$#@%$^%$^%#&%^$*&^ bakas...
I AM PISSED NOW

great......not really you just made chap one nothing special......well you can keep on writing but ima stop reading this pointless dude

...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................sigh well on to better naruto fics