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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great this weed right here was great and fresh now old and spitted out of ima go get some better fics to get me high this blows nothing exciting anymore
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im never reading this again it was already good why ruin it at all?!?!?! IT WAS GOOD AS IT IS!!! NOW ONE CHAP????? WTF MAN!!!!! so disappointed im out 0/5
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, although some chapters could have been better written. I think the torture was decent, but you need to work more on how the characters react.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELLO FROM THAILAND! this story is good i like it but how many chapters will there be like 40 or something???
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST READ MORE LET THIS FIC LIVE IT MUST LIVE!!!!!!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES a non-yaoi fic i likse it but the sex and stuff ehh kinda mediocre but it needs work like details and of course that scene with neji screwn cheri well not that long an promising but if you can fix these things ill give you a 10/10 but for now ill give you a 6
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good good you did even better ill be back baby
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"please sir can i have some more"?-Quote from that oliver twist movie all iam saying is I WANT MORE DAMNIT
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good enough story for me to check back on everyday