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for Overthrowing Konoha

by Koneko

person THE REAL GAI SENSEI
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEVER WILL I FALL UNDER THE CLUTCHE SOF A ERO ERO SHINOBI NEVER!!!!!!!!!
person Reaper Of The Nether Realm
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh angst suffering and all that tsk tsk tsk thats how i like it but needs more malice in it
person Church
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO NEJI IS MIND CONTROLLED I TELL YOU THISD IS NOT NEJI NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SON OF A BITCH RETRIBUTION IS IN ORDER ATTACK KILL SLAUGHTER WOOOT!!!!! P.s me likey updatey
person Turtle Nin
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hides in shell* no no no this is alll wrong neji-kun is supposed to be strong he cant succumb to this someone help him please oh you evil writer you *head pokes out* HURRY UP WITH MORE CHAPPISE PLEASE ME BEGGY ADN CRYIE!!!!! ILL GIVE YOU A COOKIE!!!!
person M90 Shot Gun
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BANG BOOM ZOOM TO THE MOON!!!!! i like this shame about the troture hinata has to go through she is so innocent....
person Mysterious Purple Lollipop
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is odd even if you just started it its not long though....you should extend some more or something but you can do whatever but can you update faster please? for some reason im addicted to this
person Lost ANBU Nin
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goodjob bravo there id say id give this a 4/5 due to some spelling errors and such and of course not very long
person Loudass Ninja EVer
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHAYO!!!!!!! i like this story i givse it a 9/10!!!!!
person blisblop
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a really disapointed trend in fics lately ,make a huge deal about how hot things are gonna be then punk the readers of with some couple paragrophs of vague/rushed sex.Very disappointing.I know you said this would be long,silly me, thought you meant in detail erotica.You have just started out ,I realise this but you spent little time on the torture after saying how tramatic it would be.Sorry,again, its just my take on things so you needent think this reveiw important.Tease.
person Koneko
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grand master....
The ero ero shinobies means the hentai (perv) hentai (perv) shinobies...

And the ero ero sensei is kinda like master and teacher at the same time, because she tought the jutsu to her subordinate.
Thanks fer the question, I will add it in my FAQ