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for Beside You in Time

by Desdemonal

person Boomanda
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is about the best fic i have ever read... i absolutely love the writing and the way you make them so in character! you my friend are a true genious! I hope, no i beg that you write more of your story! you much hurry and write!
(Ps: thank you for blessing us with this gift!!! XP XD)
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! *thumbs up*
person Super-spy-guy
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh please write more the story is great
person Mally
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mer...don't know if I reviewed before....But if I did oh well. It is so good! Lee and Gai are two of my fave characters...and gods above are they cute. I mean, in the Manga it's more of a son/father relationship....but the yaoi lover in me wants it to be more. ^^ Anyways, I have to go...but please post more! It's such a good fic! I love it!
~Mally~
person Chibi-Neko
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good about leading us into the story, but where is the hugging? the kissing? the....yaoi! << well I'll be waiting for more chapters, keep writing! ^^
person Bakura
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's...


so...

CUTE O_O

update ;.;

pleeeeeeeeease ;.;
person snowfrostwinter21
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this plz update, don't quit writting like so many others do on stories i like. The plot and the direction your taking it in keep it up.
person LeeXNaru
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Konosakubunga daisukidattebayo!! I really like the way you keep with the original personality of the characters, and add some new depth to them as well. Also it's good to see someone writing stories which explore yaoi themes/pairings, but without being either plot-less porn stories, or overly cheesy love stories. So anyways...hopefully we get to see a part four soon?? But on that same note ignore us pesky and impatient readers and take as much as you fell necessary, after all it's worth waiting if the result is better quality literature.

Ja Ne
person DL
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you! Purely in an adorative sense. Gai and Lee are my favorite pairing and Lee is my favorite character. Too many times their characterization in fanfiction has been rushed, OOC, or just flat and 2-dimensional. Your feeding my addiction with this story and I hope you keep updating. Please keep writing!
Sin.,
DL
person Lover of Green Beasts
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH!! WAI!!!!! ::glomps you fericiously and purrs, cuddling against you:: You UPDATED!!! So happy! And Lee-sama, ::giggles:: he's so cute. I can imagine him laying on the counter going 'fooooooooood'.....Hey wait, I DO THAT TOO!!! ::tiwtches:: Wow, I seem to be odd, affectionate, and hyper all at the same time.....that could get scarier than it already is.

So I'll just say, I love the way you've written the characters, I LOVE the drunken Lee-sama thing even more now because him without inhibitions is great!! And I LOVE THE PAIRINGSS!! KakaIru SasuNaru and GaiLee are some of my faves. (KakaGai and GaaLee are among the most faves of faves, but I'm starting to like GaiLee better ><)

Then again, everything I more....much msaid was probably already obvious to begin with! No more exclamation marks.....they buuuuuurn!!! There's another one!! AND ANOTHER!! ::goes on and on::

I loved it and would enjoy reading more, BWAHAHAHAHA!!! OH NO, THE EXCLAMATIONS!!