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November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this fic. I like your flow of language, I like the snippets of Naruto-speech in the beginning of each chapter and I love how you wrote characters and interactions. All from Naruto (who I adore in this story!) and Sasuke, to Shikamaru and Sakura. *smile* Itachi is lovingly creepy, Kakashi is great, Iruka is so nice and I like the way you've added Chouji and Kiba into all of it.
I like the plot (it doesn't matter if it's "cliché" as you say *smile* cliché doesn't have to mean bad ^^ And I think you're doing it very well) and as I said; I really enjoy your writing.
I'm well aware that you might nver finish this story but I still wanted to say thanks for the entertainment so far and if you ever get around to update I would love to know! If you could send me an e-mail on ookami-ryuu@hotmail.com I would be very grateful.
Another thing I wanted to mention is that you shouldn't care so much about people complaining about your review-replies and/or author's notes. *warm smile* If they don't like it it's not exactly hard to simply skip over and it's entirely your choice what you want to write in your chapters. *smile*
I just kinda noticed that you apologized for something in practically every chapter and I don't think you deserve that. ^^ Sometimes for short chapters (you're the author and you know yourself when you feel it's the right time to "stop"! Seriously) and sometimes for taking long to update (inspiration isn't something that can be forced and sometimes real life gets in the way, or other things... people needs to learn some patience *rolls eyes*).
Anyway. I hope that you pick this up one day if you ever get your inspiration back for it. *smile*
//Dragonwolf
I like the plot (it doesn't matter if it's "cliché" as you say *smile* cliché doesn't have to mean bad ^^ And I think you're doing it very well) and as I said; I really enjoy your writing.
I'm well aware that you might nver finish this story but I still wanted to say thanks for the entertainment so far and if you ever get around to update I would love to know! If you could send me an e-mail on ookami-ryuu@hotmail.com I would be very grateful.
Another thing I wanted to mention is that you shouldn't care so much about people complaining about your review-replies and/or author's notes. *warm smile* If they don't like it it's not exactly hard to simply skip over and it's entirely your choice what you want to write in your chapters. *smile*
I just kinda noticed that you apologized for something in practically every chapter and I don't think you deserve that. ^^ Sometimes for short chapters (you're the author and you know yourself when you feel it's the right time to "stop"! Seriously) and sometimes for taking long to update (inspiration isn't something that can be forced and sometimes real life gets in the way, or other things... people needs to learn some patience *rolls eyes*).
Anyway. I hope that you pick this up one day if you ever get your inspiration back for it. *smile*
//Dragonwolf
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Don't stop please, I'll be your muse, I'll give you inspiration!
Just write this!
I'm sorry so many people have given you so much grief about the responses to review, I must admit that I skipped them all myself, since none were for me, since I've only just now discovered this story, but I think it's very sweet and nice of you to respond to your readers!
It's like, you appreciate us appreciating your fic, and we appreciate your appreciation back.. vicious circle ;)
Please tell me that Itachi murdered the family, and Minato is innocent, because I can't imagine him a crazy murdere. Minato is one of the figures in my head that could never do something like that.. naive and childish thinking, I know..
If you ever decide to continue this, I would love to get an email saying so because I really love this!
I don't know when you posted this, because for some reason I haven't looked at the dates, -palmface-, but if it has any sort of chance for being updated, then I would send you lots of mental love, rainbows, chocolate and ramen!
Maybe the saving-naruto-in-the-hallway was a bit too sweet, but it was needed. I hate it when Naruto dosen't stand up for himself, and just accepts the hits and blows to his pride. I love the guy way too much :P
And Sasuke is awesome! Love a pushy Sasuke, else we would get nowhere :P
Sakura is good. I have had problems with her, but after Shippuuden, I can accept her. And in this fic, she's good too. I don't condemn Sakura-bashing too much, because she isn't evil, just.. a bit self-centered ;)
Itachi creeps the hell out of me! But I love him anyway, freaky, ne? XD
Anyway, suma sumarum: I love this, please send me an email if you update or find time to respond to all this blabber :D
(pst, my email..) --> egf_tas@hotmail.com
Love Mulle
Just write this!
I'm sorry so many people have given you so much grief about the responses to review, I must admit that I skipped them all myself, since none were for me, since I've only just now discovered this story, but I think it's very sweet and nice of you to respond to your readers!
It's like, you appreciate us appreciating your fic, and we appreciate your appreciation back.. vicious circle ;)
Please tell me that Itachi murdered the family, and Minato is innocent, because I can't imagine him a crazy murdere. Minato is one of the figures in my head that could never do something like that.. naive and childish thinking, I know..
If you ever decide to continue this, I would love to get an email saying so because I really love this!
I don't know when you posted this, because for some reason I haven't looked at the dates, -palmface-, but if it has any sort of chance for being updated, then I would send you lots of mental love, rainbows, chocolate and ramen!
Maybe the saving-naruto-in-the-hallway was a bit too sweet, but it was needed. I hate it when Naruto dosen't stand up for himself, and just accepts the hits and blows to his pride. I love the guy way too much :P
And Sasuke is awesome! Love a pushy Sasuke, else we would get nowhere :P
Sakura is good. I have had problems with her, but after Shippuuden, I can accept her. And in this fic, she's good too. I don't condemn Sakura-bashing too much, because she isn't evil, just.. a bit self-centered ;)
Itachi creeps the hell out of me! But I love him anyway, freaky, ne? XD
Anyway, suma sumarum: I love this, please send me an email if you update or find time to respond to all this blabber :D
(pst, my email..) --> egf_tas@hotmail.com
Love Mulle
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww mannn ;___; dont discontinuuue, arent you potentially really close to an ending? -crycry- maybe find some inspiration like read doujinshi or look at fanart or something? -clings tenaciously-
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like it and im sorry you had to end it like this.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really think you should continue this story, but i understand about college D:.
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo. Love this fic! Although I probably shouldn't be here. I'm under-aged...*shifty eyes* shhhhhh! Ignoring that fact. Naruto's dad's name is Minato Namikaze. Uzukami is Naruto's mom's family name. Naruto's mom's name is Kushina. Said so in the manga. Chap 367. Moving on, I absoloutly LOVE the Naruto POV at the beginning of th chapters. I always laugh when I read them. ^^ Oh and Naruto's mom, you can see what she looks like in chapter 382. So anyways, love the fic. I think you're doing a really good job. Hope your studies are getting better. Can't wait for your next update... ^^... it's been a year... ^^' that's not good... ¬¬... Oh, and DON'T DROP THIS FIC!!! Pretty please! I love it and hope you find the notes soon!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update I can't wait to see how naruto annoys Sasuke into dating him. PLEASE~
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love what your writting I cant wait for Naruto to annoy Sasuke into being with him! please update soon!!!!!!!
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've read this story twice and loved it both times i've read it...can't wait for the update!!
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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