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*_* Itachi makes my pants happy too. *jealous of your IC-ness, you whore T_T*

<3~Lyn~

Uwah! Update your fanfic you whore :o Or there will be punishment! And I'm quite sure it will involve you being tied to my bed somehow :o And you'll probably like it... so I guess... I should think of a different punishment, eh? Damn :x Update anyways, whore~ Love you *chu!* <3

~Lyn~

God!!! >< thats such a cruel way to end a chapter...awwww! T_T I think I'm gonna cry...poor Sasuke and Naruto..."..." O_O ^_^;; so ya...AWSOME STORY!!! *glomps* I really love your story and this is my first actually saying something so ya...lol XD can't wait till the next chapter...XP

yes school sucks unfortunately if you dont want to flip burgers for the rest of your life and get decent pay you have to get good grades in colege which I am now finding out... how unfortunate... I wanted to know first and foremost if you were ever going to update this fic? and second If the finding out that narutos father killed his family thing will make sakuke break up with naruto? I hate angst some mellodrama is great and all but total angst? hnn no. And does naruto even know that his father killed sasukes family? (if he did at all) anyway good luck with college please email me for updates ^^ white_swirls@hotmail.com

just read the first chapter of this story
and i have to say, i LOVE the humour in this
and for some reason, this line
"Naruto glanced from Sasuke to Sakura and back again, his expression changing depending on who he was looking at."
had me laughing for like 10 minutes, in fact i've just started laughing again
er.. yeah,
anyway!! im gonna go carry on reading!!
XXX

O_O that did not just happen!
*is in shock*
argh wanna hit itachi sometimes!!
LIES
im really hoping naruto's dad (who also hopefully is yondy, becauses hes hot) didnt kill the family, is actually a really great guy whos exactly like naruto, they find out it was actually itachi who killed them, and itachi gets locked up, naruto's dad gets out and they all become a big happy family in the uchiha house.
erm... yeah i just sat here for like 3 hours and finished all the chapters XD
they're really good and i stick by my earlier statment that the humour is great
i noticed you havent updated in a while, and maybe hopefully you do soon? would really like it if you did since the story is fantastic, and that was a pretty big cliffhanger there, but its ok if you dont! i know that people always beg for updates and im sure it can get irritating when you've got so much to do. just hope you do is all

oh and if you do update, hopefully you write smut, because i can tell, you'd be good at it!! XD

XXX

>:( They called Naruto a fag! >_< But Sasuke and Naruto's friends scared them away!!!!^_^ I love your story!!!

I had read this story before but couldent remeber it, then I went back threw all 13chapters ^^; I thought it was de'javou *sp?* or somthin till I remeberd I read it, I honestly dont even know if your on your account or plan on updating this story ever again but it would be great if you did :D

your humor is catchy. i find myself laughing or giggleing at times. your work is captivating. i was expecting a doom and gloom and naruto's father being the cause of misfortune for his one and only was expected. that not being a bad thing really, from the time that you mentioned the father being a murderer to sasuke's parents being dead i figured a connection. i wasnt surprised but it still was entertaining, a feat carried out by a skillful writer. with that said i have a inkling of how your ending well be, this conclusion solely based on the details you yourself weaved into the story so far. people tend to forget that everything mentioned in a good story isnt just used up for space and that every word written serves a purpose. i will keep a close eye to your updates. but truthfully speaking and take this only as constructive criticism i want to say your story lacks surprise and well, originality. there are no twist and turns and it lacks creativity. you have a humerous wit and timing of situations that will bring you fans but that makes you knowledgeable of the majority of your audience not "good". i accepted your skill of words but cannot praise your talent. please do misunderstand i am captivated by your story i couldnt stop reading from the first chapter but soon your story becomes routine and predictable and thus the glow of your story disappears. i like you though. author wise. i like the story. it's a good way to past time. but not one worth remembering when it is finished.
if this comes out harsh please forgive me. old habits die hard. this is just a fanfic after all not a novel. the "bedroom football" part was funny.
thank you for taking the time to read this, if you actually got this far...
and bty i think it's very becoming of authors to comment their fans back it shows appreciation and a humbleness that is endearing.

I.LOVE.THIS.FANFIC! It is the LOVE! I adore the SasuNaru, but I also love the Itasasu hints thrown in---cause we ALL know Itachi's a secret Sasuke-freak. And your Naruto--he's perfect, all confused and wanting and yum! And what a twist this last chapter--I did NOT expect such a thing. I like it, though. Now, I'm wondering if Itachi's telling the truth, or what. Maybe he just wants Sasuke all for himself, huh? ::grin:: Anyways, I think your writing is wonderful, and I hope that you continue, although I understand that real life can be a drag on writing. I'm in college too, and MAN, is it stressful. I feel your pain.
Love this so far!