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by KeairaxSeiaa

person LiardDestrier
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! Naruto seems back on his feet, thank god. Shikamaru needs to be more involved! YOSH! That line about being interested in a relationship...I used it! It was hot. And really funny, since I'm bi and the moron in question is a homophobic female. Hooray for shika...Hook him up with NEJI! Alright, so I'm tired. Super tired. And I just spent like...3 hours on factoring and eating sugary things. So...I appoligize. Keep up the wonderful work, hope to see and update soon, blah blah.
person crossXmyXheart
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i love this story so update! soon
person Graves2
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, and this chapter is now acception. I only wish you would write it faster, but I have no room to bitch. Honestly, the only constructive critisim I have is to MAKE THEM HAVE SEX! THank you. =3
person Temari
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U're gonna write that Itachi killed them, right? RIHGT!? And Narutos dad is inocent. Yeah, that's it.Mhm!
Are you?
person Shedding Ink
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is another case where I regret no reviewing sooner. Too often I fall in love with a story but don't bother leaving a comment to the author.. And I know that, for an online author, reviews are like a hit to an addict. So please, if you read this, get the inspiration to continue.

I'll admit that I was a bit put off by the high school AU aspect and Naruto's POV in the beginning.. But I quickly grew to love it. And your take on Naruto is hilarious. I would have probably stopped reading if I hadn't started laughing out loud to his response at Kakashi's news of his failing. From there I was pulled in..
person questofdreams
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...hmmmm. What a cliffie! lol. So, I'm guessing that Itachi killed their family but framed Naruto's dad. haha. Silly speculation, sorry, lol. Well, I loved the chapter and YAY for Naruto and Sasuke being mostly ok again although now with this tailspin, who knows how Sasuke will react.

^__^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person blisblop
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As it turns out perhaps Yondaime is perfect,Eh?They are nver gonna %$@#&*^ at this rate.My problem,I know.This is gonna be good,just how much does Sasuke love Naruto?
person Nomme de Plume
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, that is just about the best cliff hanger ever, even though it makes me quite disgruntled that there is not another chapter to follow up. ^_~ anyway, i think this story is wonderfully written, not to mention the way you make the relationship totally realistic instead of having them fall head over heels and hit the sack. keep up the excellent job, and i look forward to another chapter!
person Taylor
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAGH! YONDAIME WOULDNT KILL ANYONE!! *shakes fist*
Awesome chapter though! I've been waiting forever for it. And it makes me wonder really (since all of our questions will oson be answered) DID Yondy really do it? O.O *goes into Yondaime induced shock*

Anyway, great job! Cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please keep on writing! Your doing a great job. I love Naruto's POV at the beging, it makes me laugh.