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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hej
I just find your fic again :)
I did not know, that AFF net was back :)
and I liked those chapters. Sasuke is soooo nice :P
will there be more od Iruka? He's funny o.O
and Kakashi, from chapter one, is funny too :)
write!
and post!
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I just find your fic again :)
I did not know, that AFF net was back :)
and I liked those chapters. Sasuke is soooo nice :P
will there be more od Iruka? He's funny o.O
and Kakashi, from chapter one, is funny too :)
write!
and post!
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww that was sweet. I liked that chappie. hope you update soon. Bai bai
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So nice to see Sakura not portrayed as villanously bitchy. Kudos.
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
booyah ^_^ teach those people to bully naruto *air fist*
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance* yay!! another chap!! PLEASE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! *hyperventalates*
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was definetly kawaiiness. This is now my favorite Sasuke/Naruto story ever ><. Update soon. Ja ne.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you were and still don't really know but GOD, I know one thing. You are W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L! That story is like... eating ananas in summer! *Something I really like to do:P * I love how the relation is going between Sasunaru. Very well written. and one more thing... I LOVE SHIKAMARU! God, he's always there to help Naruto and I really love the idea that now chouji and kiba will since I always thought they were his friends anyway. :P
I can't wait until you update! Sincerelly yours, Gonrie!
I can't wait until you update! Sincerelly yours, Gonrie!
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy?! what do you mean happy? they've been super angsty from the beginning, what with the "everyone hates me" "I'm not gay!" "okay, maybe i have the hots for you..." "oh no everyone found out!" Don't worry the cheese tastes good, I can't wait for more!
to sum up this chapter; AWWWWW!
can't wait for them to get together.
to sum up this chapter; AWWWWW!
can't wait for them to get together.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!! a new chapter! I was just about going craaaazzzzzyyyyy ^-^ waiting for the new one. I also like how Naruto's friends stood up for him. I also liked Sasuke's reaction to Naruto's asking Sakura out on a date *big grin* oh yes! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
soooooo i finally got around to reading this! i must say, i'm glad i did!! Houseki told me about it.. ohh.. probably AGES ago.. *has terrible memory* but, well, i was working on a project in a different fandom and fell off the narufics for awhile.. now thanks to Houseki (again) i'm suddenly ravenously craving it again (not good for my fics in other fandoms, since i now have story ideas for no less than 5 naruto fics...) ..took a lil while still for the hunger for sasunarusasu to hit again (i'm still consumed with Uchihacest but now s x n x s is vying for the OTP spot again..), but now i'm hit hard and when i saw this fic on the up'd page and the summary was familiar from houseki talking about it, i just HAD to read it
now.. 12 chapters, i should've known from the beginning that i should just open up another tab on firefox and type my review AS I READ because now i can't remember everything i wanted to comment on specifically!! there were a lot of lines in here from the beginning that i loved and made me giggle (a lot of the lines about sasuke looking like he wanted to devour naruto--who doesn't love that XD) anyway, knowing what i SHOULD'VE done and actually DOING it are two different things, ne.. and i'm a bit off track..
so my best now is: i love the story! i like your writing style and the way you write sasuke and naruto is great! i like the way each chapter opens in naruto's 1st person pov.. and i love how you write shikamaru too! i'm glad he's your fav char cuz he cracks me up. i really like reading his "thoughts" on situations--especially he and sasuke's "banter" during the game show at naruto's house (the line about not doing two things at once *doesn't remember the exact wording anymore*) ohh! and it's nice to see another person that appreciates sakura how i do! i really love her character since the time jump and when people just mindlessly bash her character it's really irritating..
oh yeah! and sasuke and naruto's first kiss? naruto's rambling mind? SO PERFECT! a good first kiss is so that way ^__^ (not that mine was that good unfortunately but.. a first kiss with a new person is that way too, ne!? so i could totally feel what he felt during that)
ah! and i just FREAKING CRACKED UP both times iruka insisted "LIES!!" XDDDDD
ok.. well i've said my peace (as much as i can manage right now--i'm really supposed to be beta'ing something and should get on that before my blurry vision turns complete double--it's bordering on 1 1/2 right now.. or.. something.. )
i look forward to more (and i'm glad there's much more in store! even if it IS gonna be angsty *has a sadomasochistic love for angst*)
~ lg
now.. 12 chapters, i should've known from the beginning that i should just open up another tab on firefox and type my review AS I READ because now i can't remember everything i wanted to comment on specifically!! there were a lot of lines in here from the beginning that i loved and made me giggle (a lot of the lines about sasuke looking like he wanted to devour naruto--who doesn't love that XD) anyway, knowing what i SHOULD'VE done and actually DOING it are two different things, ne.. and i'm a bit off track..
so my best now is: i love the story! i like your writing style and the way you write sasuke and naruto is great! i like the way each chapter opens in naruto's 1st person pov.. and i love how you write shikamaru too! i'm glad he's your fav char cuz he cracks me up. i really like reading his "thoughts" on situations--especially he and sasuke's "banter" during the game show at naruto's house (the line about not doing two things at once *doesn't remember the exact wording anymore*) ohh! and it's nice to see another person that appreciates sakura how i do! i really love her character since the time jump and when people just mindlessly bash her character it's really irritating..
oh yeah! and sasuke and naruto's first kiss? naruto's rambling mind? SO PERFECT! a good first kiss is so that way ^__^ (not that mine was that good unfortunately but.. a first kiss with a new person is that way too, ne!? so i could totally feel what he felt during that)
ah! and i just FREAKING CRACKED UP both times iruka insisted "LIES!!" XDDDDD
ok.. well i've said my peace (as much as i can manage right now--i'm really supposed to be beta'ing something and should get on that before my blurry vision turns complete double--it's bordering on 1 1/2 right now.. or.. something.. )
i look forward to more (and i'm glad there's much more in store! even if it IS gonna be angsty *has a sadomasochistic love for angst*)
~ lg