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>8U another curveball?! AAGH, the suspense is KILLING me. I've checked everyday to see if the new update was ready and at long last, chapter twelve was up. YAY! (I'm not being impatient, I'm just excited from reading the new material.) I adore the story so far and I only wish your chapters were longer, I really wanna get deeper into the atmosphere you've created. It's very well written and I cannot wait for the next update <333 Keep up the awesome writing!

Hi. This is my first time reviewing, so please forgive me if I sound a bit akward. Well, first I'd like to congragulate you on making such a fantastic story. The use of each of the senses creates a vivid picture. The emotions you display are well written and so are Naruto's thoughts (I've been having those thoughts my self and if you don't know, I'm a guy). I can really relate to his wonderings. I also really like the kiss scenes. Grrrrrrrrr. Can't wait for chapter 13!

The later chapters are less chat with your friends and more good writing...I like this new trend. Keep up the good work.

This story has more depth now. Nice job!!

WAIIII! That's sooo cute! I love this story, like really really insanely obsessively love this story! I love how you write them, they interact so well with each other, it's freaking great! -goes into angirl ranting- XD I just foud this one, i've seen it around but haven't been able to read High School Sasunaru for a while because none could meassure up to 'Spiral Falling' But i must say, this is definitely a close second, equally interesting and equally entertaining! I adore it and can't wait for another chapter of this Sasunaru goodness -droolz- :D As for the complaints you've been getting, i say a long wait between chapters is a good thing when the updated chapters make you dizzy for more and reply's to your reviewers are nice, they show that you care we enjoy your story so much. So i say reply away and i will wait forever for another chapter! Beauty damn it! It's just beauty! Plus i think you've turned me into a complete Shika fan XDD Anyways well done, keep up the good work and i will wait on baited breath for the next chappie :DD

Ja for now.

bout time, anyhoo. Loving it, kina short but still loving it.

I love this story! I'm glad you got this chapter out, and hopefully you it wont take too long until the next one!

Obviously though, there are no fangirls at this school because otherwise no problems would have erupted, lol. They'd be standing there drooling and taking pictures and those assholes wouldnt have been able to get close. Well, in yaoi land anyways.

T___T I love this story~ I'm so glad you updated. Best birthday present ever.... Well... >.> I can think of a few other things you could give me that would count toward that, but since you're not here...

*cough* Right! This is a review. Great chapter, I love how they all backed Naruto up. Aww, Shika got unlazy for Naruto's sake. That's what you call an act of god, my friends. XD Anyway, I hope you update soon, you know how much I love your stories. o.- I'll trade you my updates for yours.

Finally! I'm guessing your computer is back. Please don't drink while you work beside it anymore. I don't care for the long waits. In fact I think you owe us a few more chapters soon. Get on that.

Wow...that chapter really made me just so happy. The almost-happily-not-fight-scene made my chest flutter, it really did. I'm so glad your back! Please keep up the absolutely amazing writing! ^^