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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Innerchild
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i freaking loved this story. and your style of writing. it's hilarious how naruto tells his side of the story in the beginning, or his thoughts, whatever, it still makes me laugh like an idiot. i'd have to say that by far, my favorite scene was when naruto made sasuke call a cab just so he could walk sasuke to his front door. and then itachi being all... overprotective. it's really good so far and i can't wait for more. seriously, i've been checking like everyday to see if you've updated. and i don't even have internet at home. so, i'm breaking into other ppl's houses.... quite literally. anywho, i heard that you liked itachi and sauske together, and i can honestly say that i've never really thought about them beind together, but if you have any good stories with the pairing, then send it my way please. i'd be happy to check them out.

hope to talk to you soon,
innerchild
person sie
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great work! i hope to read more and again GREAT WORK!
person FireonIce
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get your laptop back soon. I feel so bad for you, you always seem to have some sort of computer trouble! It seems that if you didn't have any bad computer luck, you wouldn't have any luck at all D:

oh man, I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I adore the way you've written Shikamaru and that comment to the guys blocking Naruto's locker was GENIUS. I can totaly picture Shikamaru doing that, everything about his character is perfect. Keep up the damned good work and I will wait as patiently as I can for the next chapter <3

person Kajia
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!
really like your story
well written, with my most favorite pairing, sometimes funny (I loved the PMABM list ^^)
I usually don't really like high school fics but you made me love this one
I wish you luck with your computer (those little things can get so capricious sometimes...mine too has come back not so long ago but it was the screen that was off for me)
well i'm looking forward your new chapters
just a little question : how long do you intend this fic to be?
oh and really like your shikamaru too, I already likes him in the manga but your fic makes me likes him even more.

so good luck for the next chapters and keep on writing please ^^
(I'm sorry if I made some (a lot of ) mistakes but english is not my first language so.. I supposed it still be understandable anyway even if in an awkward style ^^)
person Linku
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEE!! I wish I was in that courtyard when they were kissing. *front row seat*
Oh, please update as soon as possible. I want to know when Naruto finally gives in to Sasuke... and the action begins. *evil grin*
person Ta-chan
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I...love...you, so fucking much!!!
Your the best in the whole wide world!!!!
I can't belive that talent like yours could actually exsist!!!!
Writing: amazing, characters:amazing, story: a-freaking-mazing!!!!!!!!!
Take your time sweet heart I could wait a life time for an update!!!!
Lotsa Love!!!
person Inuzuka
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_o How'd I miss this...?

It goes without saying that this is one of the best AU fics I've read (I've never really gotten into many fandoms aside from Naruto), and it's also one of the best fics overall I've read, too. Maybe if I go back and read it again, I'll hate it a little bit for being trite or something, but as it is, it's really well written, and just pulls you along (yeah, I just read it through). I kind of feel bad thinking "yeah, it could end like that," but the fuzzy feeling in my belly says that you should continue.

Or, more honestly: ^_^ More!
person REI
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!
AFTER WHO KNWOS HOW LONG!
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
person Risa
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that this has been updated *does happy dance* It was the highlight of my day to be able to read a well written sasunaru fanfic. Thank you so much. Keep up the great work.
person dawn
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry bout complainin i'm glad u didn;t stop the story i woulda houndid u it's to good of a story