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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squees* Though the chappies are short, I'm completely addicted! What a great fic! Despite the hatred towards Naruto from the students *cries*, I'm really glad that Sasuke pursued him. Can't wait to read more from you! And thanks so much for sharing.....hope the relationship will come out ok. It's so hard to believe that Arashi killed his family tho... :(
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the yondaime's name is Minato it says so in the manga
also, i personally hate incest of any kind. so naturally i hated the hints of ita/sasu, but thankyou. i appreciated the fact that you kept it on the DL. it's a great fic. congrats
also, i personally hate incest of any kind. so naturally i hated the hints of ita/sasu, but thankyou. i appreciated the fact that you kept it on the DL. it's a great fic. congrats
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a curve ball! You said you had a twist up your sleeve, but I was almost expecting something benign. Man, you blew it out of the park! Awesome fic. I look forward to more - don't you dare drop it! I'll flick toothpicks at you if you do. Nice minty ones, not the nasty nibbled kind. My logic never fails.
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I have no idea when the last time this was updated because AFF don't really have dates and stuff.. Or do they?? Can't remember... I don't think I looked actually.. Ahh well it just probably mean that you'll need to update. And soon! :P
Am enjoying this tonnes! At first I could've sworn I'd read this fic somewhere before (the start anyway) you never posted on FF.N or anything did you??
Or mayhap your writing style is just eerily like someone else.. Not really sure but all the first person pov at the start..
Anyway, just a note on all those long author notes and review responses and what not. Personally I don't care either way. As a reviewer I love getting replies because it means something I said actually mattered but I guess if you're not one of the recipients to said replies it can be a bit annoying. But if that really was such a case then just scroll past it. Sheesh that's what the things for anyway. But if people make such a big deal of it and ONLY it then pooey to them. There's more important things in life. Such as reading good fanfic. So please do not ever stop because of a number of imbecilic morons. It's not worth it.
But anyway, with this fic; can i say i really LOVE Sasuke! ^_^ Naruto's my favourite character full stop but I love your Sasuke! He's so suave and cool! XDXD And aggressive! The whole seme/uke thing, it's really a yaoi manga sorta thing. Cuz for Japanese it really is be all end all one sort of pairing only. With western slash its lots more reciprical. Either floats my boat although I probably do prefer Sasunaru. Well.. depends on the writing I suppose.
Itachi is.. freaky. In a cool way, I do like the over protectiveness thing. Quasi Itasasu is okay too, as long as the main pairing is Sasunarusasu etc.
Much love to Shikamaru! He's gorgeous as usual! Glad Naruto does have some friends to rely on. Too bad there isn't much Gaara or Lee or Neji though. Fancy them making an appearance??
The relationship between Sasunaru is really well written I think, I love how they come together and how it's still got the semi reluctance (well fake denial) from Naruto thing going.
Naruto saying he wanted to "See his father and that Sasuke should come" to me felt a bit non sequitar. Or perhaps it was the scene it was in, because Naruto hadn't seen his father for "Years" and then all of a sudden??
I can see the plot twist though what with falling in love with your family murderer's son but still. Hmmmmm. Poor Naruto baby though. Just when he was starting to accept Sasuke properly. Hope this works out soon. Then we can get onto the proper smexing.
Payback for all the bullies would be a happy thing to see too I think. If it happens. Cuz Naruto deserves retribution! Even if say done on his behalf?? *cough* ;)
Hope RL is going well, do keep writing though cuz this fic rocks! ^_^;;
Am enjoying this tonnes! At first I could've sworn I'd read this fic somewhere before (the start anyway) you never posted on FF.N or anything did you??
Or mayhap your writing style is just eerily like someone else.. Not really sure but all the first person pov at the start..
Anyway, just a note on all those long author notes and review responses and what not. Personally I don't care either way. As a reviewer I love getting replies because it means something I said actually mattered but I guess if you're not one of the recipients to said replies it can be a bit annoying. But if that really was such a case then just scroll past it. Sheesh that's what the things for anyway. But if people make such a big deal of it and ONLY it then pooey to them. There's more important things in life. Such as reading good fanfic. So please do not ever stop because of a number of imbecilic morons. It's not worth it.
But anyway, with this fic; can i say i really LOVE Sasuke! ^_^ Naruto's my favourite character full stop but I love your Sasuke! He's so suave and cool! XDXD And aggressive! The whole seme/uke thing, it's really a yaoi manga sorta thing. Cuz for Japanese it really is be all end all one sort of pairing only. With western slash its lots more reciprical. Either floats my boat although I probably do prefer Sasunaru. Well.. depends on the writing I suppose.
Itachi is.. freaky. In a cool way, I do like the over protectiveness thing. Quasi Itasasu is okay too, as long as the main pairing is Sasunarusasu etc.
Much love to Shikamaru! He's gorgeous as usual! Glad Naruto does have some friends to rely on. Too bad there isn't much Gaara or Lee or Neji though. Fancy them making an appearance??
The relationship between Sasunaru is really well written I think, I love how they come together and how it's still got the semi reluctance (well fake denial) from Naruto thing going.
Naruto saying he wanted to "See his father and that Sasuke should come" to me felt a bit non sequitar. Or perhaps it was the scene it was in, because Naruto hadn't seen his father for "Years" and then all of a sudden??
I can see the plot twist though what with falling in love with your family murderer's son but still. Hmmmmm. Poor Naruto baby though. Just when he was starting to accept Sasuke properly. Hope this works out soon. Then we can get onto the proper smexing.
Payback for all the bullies would be a happy thing to see too I think. If it happens. Cuz Naruto deserves retribution! Even if say done on his behalf?? *cough* ;)
Hope RL is going well, do keep writing though cuz this fic rocks! ^_^;;
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm really liking this story. I hope you'll update soon, but I haven't in almost a year, so I can't talk... but you know, things happen. Anyway, your story rocks. I know updating is troublesome, but please?
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when you announced that you would be continuing the story. soon after fourteen folllowed and I loyally kept watch for the following fifthteen.. But it still hasn't come and I'm starting to doubt that it ever will.
I love your story and I'd love to see more of it.
I love your story and I'd love to see more of it.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, your story is absolutely amazing! I read the entire thing today and I couldn't stop! It's so well written and I love how you make Naruto talk at the beginning of every chapter. I can't wait until you update and I hope things at school get easier for you (By the way, do you know how I can put this story on alert or something? Sorry, I'm new on this site. I've only used FF.Net =P)
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! Wonderfull work, im completely in love with this plot. It would be a real shame if you were to not finish it, you have tons of talent! PLease update as soon as your able and good luck with writing and life in general <3
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! ITS A CLIFFHANGER! I love the ending to this chapter, its so suspencfull. NO SASUKE, DONT THINK LIKE THAT! haha Please update soon, the way you left their relationship is KILLING me