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by KeairaxSeiaa

schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah poor Naru-chan. How mean! *twin waterfalls of tears* He needs lots of comforting sex...please. ^_^
person Virgo's Kiss
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing at the beginning but- *le shock* Did.... Sakura actually tell everyone? Some friend.. even if it was only one person she told. Although I can sort of see why she freaked out, but it kind of makes it worse. *sigh* I hope this doesn't hurt Sasuke and Naruto's relationship too much. Anyway, please get some sleep and start the next chapter as soon as you can! Also, just in case you need an extra/reserve beta, i'll leave my e-mail.
namea(underscore)naiad(at)yahoo(dot)com
The parenthesis are in case Aff(dot)net blanks out my email address, but you likely new that they stood for the special characters. ^^; Till next chapter,
-an anonymous reviewer a.k.a Virgo's Kiss
person ky0kichi
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wtfmister?! Sakura!! that stupid wank! She just had to go and telle veryone didn't she?! -kills her for being a jealous gossiping biatch!!!-

>_<@ I wish Naruto wasn't so skittish about it though. I can understand that he doesn't want everyone to know, but he's being all intimate with Sasuke, yet inwardly denying that he likes it or something? XD -stops talking randomly-

This was a WONDERFUL chapter! I can't wait to see what happens. Sasuke should totally go kick someones ass! WAHAHA
person mgp
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shock! Naruto, don't be hurt! There's a fearful tension here...
person nocturne
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bad naruto! don't listen to the ebil people!

meh.

people suck

...so does sakura. x.x

MEH.
person DazeWolf
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Scary sweet and frightening! Poor Naruto!

Beautiful story, all of it! But before recently I was too afraid to comment on anyone's stories. ^^ Now that I'm all up in this reviewing mode, it's lots of fun! Especially when reviewing such great stories as yours! ^^

Ah, I love how you write Naruto and Sasuke's personalities. They're just that teensy bit of OOC that makes them so completely adorable. x3 I'm surprised that Sakura would go off telling people so soon, did she really? Well, I guess I would tell my friends. x3 But for good reasons. Very good reasons. :3
person A.H.
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so hopeless. I just had to see if you updated or not even though I felt the chances were low, and you know what? *Gasp* YOU UPDATED!! MADE MY DAY!! XDD I have to say. there's not much [yaoi] fanfics where the couples are caught and such or better, quite close in the "beginning"! Loving that little twist you put in there. I guess Sakura told one person and it spread? o.o I can't see what will happen on the next chapter! PLEASE update more often! ;-; You're soo awesome! <3
person A.H.
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so hopeless. I just had to see if you updated or not even though I felt the chances were low, and you know what? *Gasp* YOU UPDATED!! MADE MY DAY!! XDD I have to say. there's not much [yaoi] fanfics where the couples are caught and such or better, quite close in the "beginning"! Loving that little twist you put in there. I guess Sakura told one person and it spread? o.o I can't see what will happen on the next chapter! PLEASE update more often! ;-; You're soo awesome! <3 Just from memory recalling, are there going to be any other Naruto chaarcters besides Team 7? I might be wrong since it's been a while since I read the last chapter. Maybe I should re-read it again. @___@
person Carrot
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!! I swear i've been chanting OMG for about ten minutes! OMG OMG OMG! They all know!! Ah holy crap I hope to gawd Naruto doesn't get scared away! Poor Sasuke!! Aw I hope this doesn't ruin his chances!! I got a sneaky suspicion that it wont in the end but GEEZ! KK you go and hurry up with the next chapter kk? I'm gonna sit here and wait.
person Karesu
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* That is so not fair! Naruto is going to be pushed away for Sasuke because everyone else is against them! Why did Sakura have to walk in? WHY DAMNIT! I say Sasuke should murder her, then life would be better! *wails in unhappiness* I would love to think this chapter was just a figmint of my imagination, but I dont think that you will allow me that liberty. I love this story so much though! *sigh* Okay, can you at least let Naru-chan not be driven away for TOO long if he dose? I have read way to many sad fanfictions as of late. And poor Sasuke... *Cries*