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*cries for Naruto* *kills Sakura, who no doubtedly told* *hugs Sasuke, for being so GOSH DARNED CUTE*

How could you make Naruto into such a coward. He would have at least given a semblance of a fight.

But I was glad you didn't make him do something stupid like saying ugly words to deny and hurting everyone's feeling.

Was it Sakura who blabbed?! That BITCH!!! I'll kill her! <_< >_>
ANYWAY......Yay, an update! Poor Sasuke, it just gets harder and harder for him to get into Naruto's pants.
And the beginning with Naruto rambling on about laser beam eyes was hilarious. I'm wondering how much longer Itachi is going to last before he blows. THAT should be a very interesting chapter.
Good work! Love you're writing style. Keep it up! ^_^

(eyes are currently the size of golf balls)

Whhaaa~at?!? You can't jest stop there!! That's evil! Wah! poor Naruto!!

Update update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease
oh I can’t wait tell Sasuke slaps that that BITCH *Argahhhhhh* I hate her >_<
where does she get of telling there secrete its theirs not hers damn her *grrrrrrrrr*

UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE

“Pleasantly plump.” !!! So cute!! God I love your writing!! love love love! Keep up the good work! <3

oh my! what an ending! Poor Naruto. Great chapter though, thanks for updating! Congradulations on moving into your dorm! I hope you get a chance to update again soon.

I wanted to review at chapter six, but I'll do it at seven because well... I wanted to keep reading XD. Love it so far. And that's Love with a capital 'L'. You seriously win. I was so glad to see a writer who makes Naruto act like himself and not like your typical uke(or, more accurately, like a woman with a penis). And then... you gave me hope that they'd switch positions and that just... gah. Love squared, man. I can't tell you how much I love equal relationships O_O. Naruto can't get it up the butt all the time (and judging by Naruto's personality in this, I highly doubt he'll stay the penetrated all the time XD), it makes the relationship seem more _fair_. And if it's a fair relationship Sasuke should be able to set aside pride and bottom once and a while(of coarse this hope and longing for that being true has nothing to do with me wanting to read about a moaning and gasping and squirming topped Sasuke who has difficulty walking in the morning and must deal with a gloating 'wasn' I good?' Naruto, no...... well yes that, but equality first and foremost. ....really. *coughs*). And the ItaSasu element. I'm completely fine with it ^_^!

Right. *continues reading <3*

Ha, yes, very good. I love when Naruto crawl on the table, it's so like him to act like an animal. And I'm sure that's the type of things that make Sasuke horny, after all, it's sexy! Aah, Sakura is a bitch for telling everyone. No, Naruto will lose is confidence in them. Well, a lot of things can happen. I love your story! Good luck for the next chapter! Ja ne!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DONT END IT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!