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by KeairaxSeiaa

person MeLaiya
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wwwaaaaahhhhh, I want more, I want more damn it!!! Anyhoo, Im loving this, keep up the good work and update soon. TaTa
person naruke
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You might know what I want, but I'll just say it: FRIGGING CONTIUNE!!!!! AS MANY CHAPTERS AS YOU CAN WITH YOUR POWER!!!!!! HAIL TO THE ALMIGHTY KEAIRAxSEIAA!!!!!!!!!
person Shadows_Call
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, you should stop listening to what people complain about. Especially when it really has nothing to do with the story. ^^;

Anywho, now that that gripe is out of the way... Aww, poor Sasuke. He was just about to get some movie gropage when the evil people stepped in. I like the chapter, and their community service. *snerk* That had to be a pretty out of it elderly person to fall asleep around Naruto. *cough* That is, if he were real, and... well yeah, you get my point. ^^; Just write more soon. And I'll repay you with porn. Of your choice.
person Jaided
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sad!! *bottom lip protrudes* Update soon!???? Please!???????
person himeyume
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES next chapter I want to read about how naruto will over come this and be with sasuke
pls pls update soon asap thank you
person yan-yan
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! why does people have to discriminate! is it that bad to be gay!? I don't mind at all! I love my sasunaru gayness to the core!!!! Kyahh!!! I really like the way you write the story ^__^ -BTW, this is yianne21... that's my former penname that I use to review your story... just wanna let you know that i haven't forgotten your story AT ALL! keep it up!
person no name for now
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo, you have a looot of spoilers. Good job! And did Sakura opened her mouth? Naruto should slap her...That being said, I can't wait for the next chapter. Sasuke better brutally kick some ass.
person Michiru
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I may be the only one that actually feels sorry for Sakura. ^^; It seems she was the one who told, although I wonder if it was with the intent for everyone to know. She could have just told her best friend in confidence, who then told everyone else... if that were the case, I wouldn't see any fault in that. Of course, she could have just told everyone as "revenge" against Sasuke and Naruto, which would be cruel. "Outting" a homosexual couple in high school could be very dangerous for the two involved, and she should be smart enough to realize that. But, I guess people do things that they wouldn't ordinarily do when they're upset or angry, so maybe she did. We'll just have to wait to see. :p Anyway, I'm rambling... that's enough about that. I really liked this chapter... I love how you write Sasuke and Naruto, and I enjoy reading your Naruto's POV. This is definitely one of my favourite SasuNaru stories. I look forward to the next chapter. Please continue soon! :)
person Houseki
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nya!! Naruto crawling across the table was hot and the makeout session even hotter!! Ah I wish you'd up'd more, but I know how things go...still haven't up'd mine in quite some time...the writing bug is sleeping or squashed or something cuz I can't get in the mood. But at least you up'd and it was a pleasently good chap. Poor Sasuke though..I can't believe Sakura told someone..who told someone..who told someone... yeah.. that's how rumors start ya know? lol aww it was so sad!! i wanted to see what would happen in the theater!!! *sigh* let the drama begin ^__~ Believe it!

Mata ja!

Houseki
person Kiaralana
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it and I want more! :3 No, honest do update soon! Hm, sorry, I don't like it when reviewers order writers, I should just thank you for this story, but I
just read it and aw...I want the next chapters.
I'm sorry there have been dumb people complaining about your review responses. I skipped them, but I think it's great of you to response to as many as possible.Sorry to comment on that again XD, I'm going to comment on your story now.
I looove ItaSasu, so I'm very happy to know that's what you've got in mind even if it's very very (well too much for my part lol) light. I'm a dead SasuNaruSasu fan girl, it's the most romantic couple I know -btw, I completly agree with you, who cares about who's the uke and who's the teme? Another good point for you!- but I love to think of Itashi's impossible love and yearning for his little brother. I find it so romantic. So even if we don't have much of
Itashi there, I love the way you picture him. Btw, you succeed in keeping everyone in character, that's nice.
I find your story has got a melancholic feeling, it's a bit strange as the plot isn't melancholic. Maybe it's the dark Uchiha's mansion and Itashi hovering around. And Sasuke's very quiet too, *and* I've been reading in a very silent room in the middle of a winter afternoon, so maybe it's just me lol. Anyway I did laugh at many points, it's also very funny ^^
About the tittle, it's nice I find, though of course, it doesn't cover the whole plot, but so what? that's how everything started, ain't it?
I hope to read the next chapters soon ^^ Have you got a mailing list for updates? If so, can you add my email please? thanks!