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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job on this chapter, and fic in general. I could not believe the last chapter, it was so sad an frusterating! PLease update as soon as you can so my mind can be set at ease XD
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story
so when are you going to update
so when are you going to update
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
argh you took wayyyy too long to update! and it was short! i feel cheated! tempted to never read anything you write again!(end dramatic rambling...) unfortunately i love this story and your ideas....lol. pretty please with sugar on top update soon!!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=52. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=52. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update. I'm in love with this story. Naruto is so adorable. You really bring him to life. Normally I wouldn't have gone for the high school setting but I quickly fell in love with the story. Please continue..
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The irony gods have certainly done a number on Naruto. I can't decide if Yondaime is actually the murderer or merely connected in some way to the incident and wrongly blamed for it. Or, I guess it could all be some plot of Itachi's. Kudos on complicating their lives so heartwrenchingly. And now, of course, the Avenger side of Sasuke is rearing it's bloody head. And poor Naruto still has no idea what's going on. It's really is a beautiful web so far.
I adore you characterization of Sakura. She is much more believably real while still seeming IC than the homophobic bitch she's someimes writen and ruined as. And despite the potential clicheness of the scene where Naruo's friends stnad up for him, I loved it. Especially Sakura being the first to step in for the couple, and the fact that Kiba and Choji finally grew some balls and took a stand for a friend (I'm referring to how you wrote that they avoided Naru-chan in the caffeteria). It was just too cute, and perfectly IC, when Naruto claimed credit for the victory and assumed he was just THAT amazing.
I love the fic so far
~Panther
I adore you characterization of Sakura. She is much more believably real while still seeming IC than the homophobic bitch she's someimes writen and ruined as. And despite the potential clicheness of the scene where Naruo's friends stnad up for him, I loved it. Especially Sakura being the first to step in for the couple, and the fact that Kiba and Choji finally grew some balls and took a stand for a friend (I'm referring to how you wrote that they avoided Naru-chan in the caffeteria). It was just too cute, and perfectly IC, when Naruto claimed credit for the victory and assumed he was just THAT amazing.
I love the fic so far
~Panther
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update soon. I'm waiting to see what happens lol
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm very happy that I managed to find this fic after so long ^^ I became very busy, and since aff.net changed servers and all the links changed~ Anyhow! :D Actually, I haven't read the recent chapters yet, but I'll leave another review for them next time ^^
This is one of the fics that made me want to write for the SasuNaru fandom, so I'm very, very, very happy that I managed to find this again :) Good luck with your subjects! :D *will review later*
--Seto's Darkness :)
This is one of the fics that made me want to write for the SasuNaru fandom, so I'm very, very, very happy that I managed to find this again :) Good luck with your subjects! :D *will review later*
--Seto's Darkness :)
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
New chapter?? Love the story