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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Luka
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person carol-chan
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a well-written story~ i really enjoy reading the lil' segments on naruto's thoughts trying to keep his manly pride intact. just wondering...is there gonna be an appearance from gaara? that would make things a bit difficult for both boys. anyways, hope to see more from you soon.
person Shadows_Call
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah, sorry this is late. *glomp* ^^ I liked this chapter a lot! Shikamaru was cute, but then I figured you would do a good job with him. o.o Will there ever be yaoi in it? Or is that something I need to sit on you until you agree to do?
person Neko_0
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh.. i love it. You write wonderfully and keep us readers interested. I have found myself slowly retreating from Naru/Sasu fanfics. I got bored of the Naruto pairings so i moved onto something different. You have successfully captured my interest and I congratulate you! I love the peoples personalities. They arent OFC... yet you added something different and more likable.

I am slightly confused as to your author notes of the Uchihacest. I have no problem with it but i usually feel a bit disappointed when it interups a Naruto/Sasuke moment. Sasuke's brother IS just a protective brother, right? He is not harboring love for his younger brother is he? It would be an alright twist.. but I'd rather you didnt. Course, my opinions dont really matter.. it IS your story. You are doing a wonderful job by the way. Update.. FAST! I shall come beat you with a stick if you keep me in suspense. XD I tend to threaten the authors of the stories that i like. sorry.. *shuts up and leaves*
person loveslave
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! what a cute date! I loved that, you kept me up till 4 in the morning and i dont regret it at all! i hope you're updating again soon! you have a devoted fan waiting.

(i love your Naruto to peices, good job writing him!)
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY, REALLY like this fic^^ The part with the pizza slice made me smile soooo bad it creeped my lil sister (she was sitting across from me watching TV) out. Lol. Mmm, Itachi's being a bit of a butt. I guess it's just his way of caring? It reminds me of how my dad "inspects" all boyfriends my sisters and I bring home XD Plz update soon! Oh, and happy New Year!!
person Jinhito
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* I'm only chapter 3 of your story and oh my god... I nearly snorted a piece of macaroni out my nose... (I'm eating a late lunch and Iruka nearly had me dying) XD This is hilarious, I can't wait to read more, and just felt you should know my thoughts in advance since it could be a while before I actually finish reading. Heh heh, and yeah the food mentioning? I figured you might like that too... I know I'm gonna enjoy the rest of this fic; cliche` or not!
person Ta-chan
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update soon!!!
I love how you portray Naruto and how he denies being in denial...almost.
You did very well with getting Shikamaru's character as with Kakashi.
Oh, I love Sasuke's sexy evil stalker-ness.
One question, must you always reply to every review, I don't want to be rude or mean, but you make the chapter seem alot longer then it actually is, and I hate being led on like that.
Aside from that your writing is wonderfull, update soon.
person GiGi1o1
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLESE UPDATE!!I SPENT 3 HOURS READING THIS AND i NEED TO READ MORE!!!CAUSE THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN' AWSOME!!!!
person kit master
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squeeeeelllllllllllllllllllll of glee!! I love this story. Please MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I'm like stuck to my chair until you update!!


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