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by KeairaxSeiaa

person LibertyCrusader
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE your story. I've been following since chapter 4 (and haven't written a review yet which is why this is so long), and I have a friend who's been following since chapter 6. Whenever you update, the day of, or the day after, we see each other and one of us says "She updated Watching" followed by "I know, I've already read it". I usually don't like AUs, but you capture the character of Naruto and Sasuke /so/ well. It's the typical high-school plot, but you've done it very well.

Also, thank you for what you've done with ItaSasu. I have issues with that pairing, probably because what I know of Itachi is based mostly off of fanfiction as I'm not up to date in the series (And I hit myself every time I read fanfiction, because I keep reading spoilers...but SasuNaru is so irresistible!), but trying to get there, and I haven't seen much of him yet. Anyway, I wouldn't have stopped reading your fic if you included it, I would have skipped over it, but I'm really glad I didn't have to skip any of your writing because I really love it.

LOVED the initial kiss, by the way; I think you portrayed Naruto's feelings and thoughts really well.

Please ignore whoever is bitching about your review responses. If they can't handle skipping over them, they aren't worth your time. Do what the fuck you want.
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
x.x why is it a mistake? they're hot, so? update!!! XD
person losthimagain
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok that is getting creepy WHy wont Iggit (Itachi) just fucking do SOMETHING already I want take the suspence!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person "A_H"
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Must be one of the first readers to read this new chapter! :D Unless my pass out on the bed let me down. >.> I have to say that I think that this is probably more better then "Chasing Naruto". Probably it's because it's what I think of them as a couple and not as OOC a bit. Gah! Keep on writing! :D I can't wait for the new one! I need to re-read the Author's Note again. I'm feeling a bit confused on the SasuIta thing. Meh. From what I read and I am sorry if I misread something, I really wish there will be like maybe a SasuIta coupling except maybe Sasuke hating it a little or "something happened" when they were young---yeah, I'm tripping over my own words, lol. Well, I REALLY can't wait for the upcoming chapter. I'll be stalking ya. I'm surprised AFF allows guests to review. o_o
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still think your a jerk for not apologizing for that unnecessarily rude comment but I do like your story.
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah, so cute! dating at ichiraku... sasuke's a romantic, really, even if he tries to deny it. wouldn't go out of his way to please naruto like that if he isn't.

i'm not much of an uchihacest fan either, and i'm rather glad that you decided to tone down the content between itachi and sasuke. i'm loving this fic more each chapter. i love the opening naruto monologue too; sorry to hear that you're finding it quite troublesome now after a few chapters...

waiting impatiently for the next update!
person RieKa
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really like the way you write.. i love the stalker Sasuke-thingy and all that.. =3 love the fact that naruto always denies that he IS gay.. haha!! he's likely to do that.. hehe..

oh and btw, i read one of your responses and you said that you were looking for a male, heterosexual yaoi fan.. haha!! well, my friend is straight.. and he LURVES yaoi AND yuri.. xD but.. he's not into SasuNaru.. i wonder why.. haha!!

anyways, nice work.. keep up the good work.. haha!! btw, what's up with itachi??

oh and hey, i added you in YM.. i'm lhukhe_ry09 =3
person Reyn
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(tries to think of a specific and original question)

(can't think of one and gives up)

I liked the whole scene with Shikamaru showing up at Naruto's apartment and Sasuke having to deal with it. That was cute.
person cibiboy
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this ch is so sweet and funny plez update soon
person Kaos
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. But why is Itachi being so cold towards Sasuke and Naruto's relationship? No wait...why is he acting like he's got a pole up his ass ALL the time? he's such a bitch...good story anyway...update soon...pweeze T_T

~Ramek~