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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Kenz
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No offence-but took you logn enough!
anyways its great amrvelous darlign just marvelous(sp?)
person Zane
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zane here! Actually no I didn't, I haven't even heard of that book, but I read an excert from it and it looks really cool. I might read it. Oh! Just so you know I'm female, not male. *no offense just letting you know so you aren't confused* But anyway enough about that, I loved this chapter. It was so sweet and I love it how your making them take it slow! *gets all starry eyed and dream bubbles appear* and they kissed!!!! on the first date! *squeals*

Question: Does Sasuke feel intimidated by Shikamaru or something? because I sense a little more than * hey! y n the hell r u here, cause im trying to molest naruto here!* hostility here. Then again I could be wrong. Oh and you trying to base their relationship by what it would be like in real life? or are you just going wit le flow?

I know your probably tired going through finals! I heard college finals are killer!!!!*looking fearful of next year* Hey! at least you get a month off for winter break!!!! And hey! I luv your review responses, don't give those up!!!!! I like reading them!!! Especially when you answer mine! It makes me feel all special! *smiles*

Enough of my rambles!!!!! Go and type next chapter!!!! Update ASAYC! (As soon as you can!)
Your number one,knucklehead, hyperactive, fan!!!!!!
-Zane
person Kai19
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! You updated!! I'm so glad!! I was really hoping you would soon.. I love this fic!! Now I'm worried Itachi might try to have a talk with Naruto to scare him off... and how Sasuke would react if he found out, or if Naruto started avoiding him due to Itachi's wrath... then he found out why... lol!! I'm a weird person, I know... Anyway! I hope to read more soon!
person diamond_princess2006
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww their first date !!! that was sweet i'm so glad you updated i had to reread a few chapters to get back into the fic because it's been a while... but you have made the wait so worth it i hope to see another update soon !

oh and about the people complaing about your review responses don't worry about them i think it's cool you take the time to give your readers feedback ^_^
person Kagaya
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...that was so sweet.
Sigh...their first date.
person Darksilk
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! I NEED MORE!!! You have to update soon!!!
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated!! Good chapter!! I love this fic. You're an awesome writer!! I hope Naruto warms up to Sasuke more really soon......... I love this pairing!!! I hope you update soon!! I <3 you!!
person MilkShake
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are awesome!!!!!!!!!
person beeku
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuuuuuu!!! i swear... if you complain anymore about reviews complaining about your author's notes and wasting your time on writing the actual fic.. I will MURDER you.
why oh WHY must we faithful readers be cursed with the... curse, of good writers who write short chapters?! bah i hate you. Okay, i like the plot, going at a good pace, and, the make out scenes are awesomely, sizzling hot. like magma. hehe. righto... i am a little sad you decided to do one sided itasasu instead of itanaru, because i REALLY like sasunaru/itasasu fics. but this is good too. yay... update soon!
person Puuulin
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must absolutely say that you are an a-class writer, I love this story and I love the way you manage to get so much action and feeling in one chapter without using many words. I hope you will keep on writing even if there are people nagging on you for answering reviews. Just don't let them get to you, they are just fools who can't understand talent and kindness in your work. And how you describe Naruto and Sasukem, grrrr, I honestly didn't think there was a way to make them more attractive and fascinating. But you proved me wrong :) Keep up the good work, can't wait till I can read more about Sasuke and Naruto :)

I hope you don't take offense of my extra note at the end of the letter. It is meant to be fore all the ones that nag on you. Just so you know :)

And once again, LOVE THIS STORY AND YOUR WORK.

Merry Christmas
//Pauline, from sweden

P.S. This goes out to all of you who are nagging on the writer:
J*sus f*cking chr*st and his army, don't you guys have better things 2 do? Have you ever thought about how it actually is nice the our reviews are answered, that means that we are appreciated for sharing our opinion and that it maybe has given a boost for the will to keep on writing. If you guys get pissed that there are extra text, then scroll past it. Nothing more to it then that. Don't destroy the joy of us fans that love this story and the extra text that comes along with it. I think it sums everything up.

And thus I wish you a merry christmas :)