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How is it your story seems new but when I got to read it tehre is any new
chapters XDXDXDDX Im dying I like this story its funny intresting....differrent in a way...


PLEASE CONTINUE IF NOT FOR ME FOR YOUR SELF!

Aw, I like this fic! ^_^ It makes me feel all warm and mushy. You know the sort; if I was a cat I'd be purring. I really like the introduction you have Naruto narrating in the beginings of the chapters and the characterization is a lot of fun. Cute plot so far and can't forget to mention the wonderful kissing scenes. Nice work!

I don't normally review, which I know is a rather cliche to an opening in a review -- but it's true. I don't normally review, simply because with most stories - by the time you get to the most recent chapter... there's nothing new to say that hasn't already been said. I'm not sure if you're writing style is my favorite - but it is interesting. The storyline isn't particularily unique - but it's even more interesting and I can't seem to stop reading. That's a good sign of a good writer, so I figured a good writer deserves a review. Here's your review - keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you in the future. x)

PS - I love your comments that you give back to your reviewers by the way.. like the "Bite me" directed at loser81 and the lengthy rant directed at someone who reviewed/criticized your author's comments rather than the story itself. It's obvious you're not afraid to say what you think, which is another good sign of a good writer. Makes me laugh every time too. xP You seem very cool and I'd love to talk to you if you're one those people who 'likes to chat', so feel free to drop me an email? Lol. Anywhoo - thanks for the fun read and keep it up!

Wow. this fic...it's just plain awesome. Simple as that lol Please update soon, and I'll be sure to read.. ;)

(go libra!! Razz=oct. 11 ;D)

OMG..omg...I just LOVE this story...Love love love! Your writing style is what drew me in at first. I can just imagine everything in the story as if I was actually watching it unfold since this story has such CHARACTER and describes their personalities well. It has a rather nice plot too, and flow along smoothly. Man, I can't even describe how ingenious this story is with words...anyway, hope you update soon!

Hi I just wanted to say that I think that people think your spending more time on the review responses than the story itself, they are even longer than the story! Great story though! Keep writing!!

Naruto isn't really that clueless is he?
Great two, chapters, since I'd missed one.^_^;;;
Keep it up!
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OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE SOON! I have become obsess with this story! I love it! I would have reviewed earlier on the first chapters but I wanted to wait till I read the 7 you had at this time.
WRITE MORE SOON!!!

Yay. I'm so happy you updated. >_< I've been waiting for it. hehehe/ I know what you mean about the selfconcious thing. OF course,once he finally decides it's alright, he won't be alone with it! And if anyone even TRIES to hurt our poor naruto, Sasuke can save the day! bahahah!

Anywho. I loved this chapter. I actually thought Naruto was being flirty with Sakura for another readon, and it made me sad..But then there was that LOVELY little bathroom scene. -sighs- You're my hero. XD

Update soon, ne?! ^^

Short chapters are cool! At least you updated, that's the importance right there. I read your first six chapters and they were awesome,I really like your story! An the Uhichacest no prob here! I luv a little *luv* between siblings once and awhile, plus it'll add to the problamatic drama between Naruto and Sasuke! One more thing is there any chance that you'll be updating 'Further From Hell' anytime in the near future, cause I luved that story too.

Can't wait till ur next update!
-Zane