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(sigh) another chapter without a review response to me...I'm starting to feel a little left out. Oh well. I'll keep reviewing anyways because I like your story so much ^_^

-Squeals- x3 I can't wait until the next chapter. And I high disapprove of incest..well..Uchiha-incest. D: but I guess I can allow a jealous Itachi around. X3...just...no incest-smex!!! D:<<<< The shame!! x3 Good update.

I absolutely adore your story. It's cute and hot and I just want to hug naruto. And that thing with the pizza broke my heart. It's little things like that that make a story uber cute. I mean how can you give to a kid a burned pizza and he never got a good slice in his life. Not right at all. *hugs Naruto* (didn't know that he was born october 10. I'm born on october 8 and I feel so close to him now...The bonds of Libras)

Off topic: I can't believe that you've got a Sasuke’s curse seal tattoo. I am so jealous, you have no idea... I decided to weaks ago that when (yes, when) I'll get my first it would be a Sasuke’s curse seal one on my shoulder. But I might not get it because my friends (one who is very involved with Naruto) will freak out once they find out I got the idea with an anime. But it's too cool not to get it. *whine*

Bring on the uchihacest baby!!!(it might be sick to some but for me, it's incredebly fascinating and interesting. Sorry if the review has lots of mistakes, english is not my first language). Keep updating :).

Sorry for the lack of reviews lately -- to quote a friend, "college is a bitch". ^^ I really enjoyed the last three chapters -- still engaging and well written, but with a thickening plot... and longer, too! (Yay! lol) ^__~ Soooo..... the "upside-down ANBU", huh? I gotta tell you, that's awesome! I actually think it's neater that way -- things are always more exciting it they have a story to go along with them! And as for the curse seal tatoo..... well, I can't wait, and I'm not even the one getting it!!! (Oh, and I'd love to see a pic, btw.) ^__^ GTG -- RL is nagging at me, lol, and I have this HUGE test tomorrow (erm...today) that I need to study for..... *sigh* ^^;; Keep up the good work!!!

yay u updated! koolies!haha Naruto is being striped of his manlyness little by little, XD and the ending to the chappi was really sweet. and it did seem homly and have a sense of security. X3 i cant wait till the next chapii. heheh their 1st date....demanded by sasuke of course. XD

are, hum, *scratch my head in wonder*, well, obviously, Sasuke will do be like that in sex, it's just, yeah, I don't like seing him weak, like, you now, begging and all. Well, don't mind me tough! Continue like this, you're doing great! So Naruto is trying to make Sasuke jealous? Tsss, that's so like him, bratty prankster! Good ItaSasu hints, as promise. Itachi will be so pissed when Sasuke will return home! You can definetly make more than overly protective brother hints (well, that's for me, I know you have to deal with other reader too). I wonder what they'll do in their date, jut hope it'll be fun, with some fooling around in public places (as we already know Sasuke has some exibitionist part in him). Thanks you so much for answearing my review! Good luck! Ja ne!

Aw. This makes me wiggle happy. (That's a good thing.) So you should write a nice long chapter next time, so a lot of other people will be wiggle happy too. :DDD

Great story, I personaly would like to see Itachi and Sasuke a little, though, plus it would make it in a way a love triangle
it would be really cool, just my opion mind, but it's a great story and i really like how it is going

Hello!

I was reading your story some time ago and stopped somewhere chapter 3 (because there wasn't anymore...). Now I've read the rest in one go. I really like it. Good and near the original characters and well described interactions between them. It feels like it could be real.

What makes it more precious is the prospect of an equal realitionship between Naruto and Sasuke. I inhale every story that does not follow the quizzically pattern of Sasuke jumping Naruto and Naruto beeing submissive (at least in bed). Because there are so many stories clinging to SasuNaru I often doubt that I watch the same anime as the authors of these stories does (then there have to be far more NaruSasu thingies...). Anyway, I'm looking forward for more chapters.

Two more things:
First, please does not let every review get near you. Whenever someone is presenting something they made to a broad audience there will be reactions that are not welcome. Often there are comments that lack a appropiate tone or are pointed at irrelevant issues but that's the normal thing. Even Beethoven oder Shakespeare have gotten good critic all the time :) I cannot pretend to really know what those comments could do to the author because I have never written a fanfic but I beg you to not stop because of some unqualified bunches of letters! :)

Second, what is a cootie(s) (or cooty)? Doesn't found it in a dictionary but I'm eager for knowledge :D

So, please keep us entertaining with more chapters (preferably soon),
Nathaniel

This was great. I am happy to tell you your fic is the first Sasuke/Naruto I've read; I'm mainly an Iruka fan. I really liked the last chapter it was nice to see what was going on in Sasuke's head. And the beginnings in each chapter is wonderful you stayed true to Naruto. I like how this fic has some depth it's not all sex sex sex; there is plot and it lives. I look forward to future chapters.